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[Mortal stream + treasure appraisal development + full repair of alchemy weapon array]
Traveling through the world of immortality, Lin Fan became the lowest servant disciple of the Zihong Immortal Sect.
By coincidence, I discovered that I could [repair and upgrade] everything.
From then on, the treasures began to be picked up, and all the countless dusty treasures were repaired to the best quality.
[Item]: Body Building Pill (defective product)
[Repair and Optimize]: The ultimate body-building pill
[Item]: worn-out textured stone
[Repaired and Optimized]: Immortal Emperor Level "Wan Yan Dao Jing"
…
A waste elixir, through his hands, turned into a supreme elixir!
A broken sword was repaired by him and became a peerless magic weapon!
Incomplete Kung Fu? Broken magic weapon? Ancient ruins? …Everything can be repaired, even beyond perfection!
Handyman? Outer door manager? The true biography of the Immortal Sect?
... You who bully me, humiliate me, and betray me.
Let's see how I, a mortal handyman, can restore the treasure, repair my spiritual roots, repair the injustice in this world step by step, and embark on the path to the highest immortality!
"You said you are a second-generation immortal? I'm sorry, your father has to beg for the elixir I repaired casually!"
This book has compact content and is a rare good book. I will vote for you in November.
Not bad, but updates are too slow
This book is very well written. The only shortcoming is that there are too few chapters. It is much better than the 9-point bullshit masterpieces produced by some trolls. I won't specify which ones here.
This is another horror novel that challenges the limits of perspective. After reading nearly 60 chapters, there is no normal person in the book, including the protagonist. They are all evil people. Life is really hard.
Run quickly, some slightly, some lightly, some deeply, some murmuring, and some even open their mouths slightly.
Why do novels nowadays not pay attention to plot, but try to depict the expressions of characters?
It's so true. This is a common problem in current Internet articles and even many popular novels. The core reasons are these. Let me tell you directly:
1. Writing plot is difficult, writing expressions is the easiest and most efficient word count
- Designing plot conflicts, foreshadowing, reversals, and logical chains is very brain-consuming, and requires careful setting and pacing.
- But when writing a description of an expression such as "slightly raised eyebrows, red eyes, pursed lips, heavy eyes, and a cold complexion", it is very easy to write three or four lines in one second without using any templates. It is very easy to make up the number of words and chapters.
Many authors are not capable enough to write plots, so they can only rely on appearance + expression + psychological fragments to make up the content.
2. Mainstream tastes have changed: now readers don't like "story" but only "character"
I used to read books: plot, adventure, grudges, and ups and downs.
There are now a large number of niche/romance/pure love/fantasy readers:
I don't care whether things make sense or whether the plot progresses.
I only care about: whether the male protagonist is suave enough, whether the female protagonist is beautiful enough, whether the character is sadistic enough, and whether the emotions are adequate.
The plot is just the background board, the characters' emotions, appearance, and atmosphere are the core.
Therefore, the author worked hard to dig out expressions, eyes, and micro-movements to amplify the sense of ambiguity, grievance, aloofness, and forbearance.
3. Fast-food reading, the plot is brain-consuming, and the expression description is "easy to eat without thinking"
Nowadays, people only have fragmented time to read books and don't want to use their brains:
- In complex plots, it is tiring to sort out the causes, consequences, and character relationships;
- The sentence "He lowered his eyes, his fingertips were white, and he was silent" directly conveys emotions without using your brain, and instantly adds a sense of atmosphere. It is suitable for quick CP and character creation.
4. The sequelae of involution of online articles: prohibiting "straight narrative" and forcing anxiety in writing style
Early novels:
He was angry and turned away.
Now the novel must be changed to:
The man's face was suddenly covered with a layer of frost, his jawline was tight, and his thin lips were pursed into a cold straight line. Without saying a word, he turned around and walked away.
A deformed aesthetic has formed in the industry:
Straightforwardness = poor writing style, piling up expressions and rhetoric = good writing style. New authors are forced to pile on facial expression details even if there is no plot.
5. Psychological descriptions are rampant and expressions are used instead of actions.
If you don't know how to write "doing things, interacting, and playing games", you can only write:
What are you thinking + what expressions are on your face + how your eyes are changing.
The whole process is full of emo, staring, pulling, and inner drama. A small incident lasts for three to five chapters, and the plot has zero advancement.
To sum up what people say:
It's not that I can't write plots, it's that I'm too lazy to write, can't write, and the market doesn't need it.
The plot is too tiring. It is both easy to write and sell when it comes to depicting expressions, adding a sense of atmosphere, and selling characters.
If you want to read a book with a compact plot, less nonsense, and not too many expressions, I can give you some tips on how to avoid lightning in book selection, and you can filter out this kind of nonsense at a glance.
Too complicated, too many explanations, everything is explained so clearly, it seems annoying
Apart from some flaws in the details, it's still pretty good. It's a pity that it's unfinished. Finally, the settings of Qin and the Six Kingdoms are somewhat new and can be read as a separate book
The beginning was good, but the ending was too watery [I tilted my head and laughed and cried] so I picked it up in a hurry.
My grades are so bad that I can't write any more. I have no choice but to end. I'm very sorry. The chapter of the battle between good and evil basically ends here, and the sequel is the story of the male protagonist leaving this fairyland to practice elsewhere, which is equivalent to the end of the human world chapter...
This book is completely nonsense. In other immortal cultivation novels, you are just a low-level laborer in practicing qi. But here you are already a master, and to practice qi you have to make alchemy by yourself. Why do you need an alchemist?
This book has compact content and is a rare good book. I will vote for you in November.
Not bad, but updates are too slow
This book is very well written. The only shortcoming is that there are too few chapters. It is much better than the 9-point bullshit masterpieces produced by some trolls. I won't specify which ones here.
This is another horror novel that challenges the limits of perspective. After reading nearly 60 chapters, there is no normal person in the book, including the protagonist. They are all evil people. Life is really hard.
Run quickly, some slightly, some lightly, some deeply, some murmuring, and some even open their mouths slightly. Why do novels nowadays not pay attention to plot, but try to depict the expressions of characters? It's so true. This is a common problem in current Internet articles and even many popular novels. The core reasons are these. Let me tell you directly: 1. Writing plot is difficult, writing expressions is the easiest and most efficient word count - Designing plot conflicts, foreshadowing, reversals, and logical chains is very brain-consuming, and requires careful setting and pacing. - But when writing a description of an expression such as "slightly raised eyebrows, red eyes, pursed lips, heavy eyes, and a cold complexion", it is very easy to write three or four lines in one second without using any templates. It is very easy to make up the number of words and chapters. Many authors are not capable enough to write plots, so they can only rely on appearance + expression + psychological fragments to make up the content. 2. Mainstream tastes have changed: now readers don't like "story" but only "character" I used to read books: plot, adventure, grudges, and ups and downs. There are now a large number of niche/romance/pure love/fantasy readers: I don't care whether things make sense or whether the plot progresses. I only care about: whether the male protagonist is suave enough, whether the female protagonist is beautiful enough, whether the character is sadistic enough, and whether the emotions are adequate. The plot is just the background board, the characters' emotions, appearance, and atmosphere are the core. Therefore, the author worked hard to dig out expressions, eyes, and micro-movements to amplify the sense of ambiguity, grievance, aloofness, and forbearance. 3. Fast-food reading, the plot is brain-consuming, and the expression description is "easy to eat without thinking" Nowadays, people only have fragmented time to read books and don't want to use their brains: - In complex plots, it is tiring to sort out the causes, consequences, and character relationships; - The sentence "He lowered his eyes, his fingertips were white, and he was silent" directly conveys emotions without using your brain, and instantly adds a sense of atmosphere. It is suitable for quick CP and character creation. 4. The sequelae of involution of online articles: prohibiting "straight narrative" and forcing anxiety in writing style Early novels: He was angry and turned away. Now the novel must be changed to: The man's face was suddenly covered with a layer of frost, his jawline was tight, and his thin lips were pursed into a cold straight line. Without saying a word, he turned around and walked away. A deformed aesthetic has formed in the industry: Straightforwardness = poor writing style, piling up expressions and rhetoric = good writing style. New authors are forced to pile on facial expression details even if there is no plot. 5. Psychological descriptions are rampant and expressions are used instead of actions. If you don't know how to write "doing things, interacting, and playing games", you can only write: What are you thinking + what expressions are on your face + how your eyes are changing. The whole process is full of emo, staring, pulling, and inner drama. A small incident lasts for three to five chapters, and the plot has zero advancement. To sum up what people say: It's not that I can't write plots, it's that I'm too lazy to write, can't write, and the market doesn't need it. The plot is too tiring. It is both easy to write and sell when it comes to depicting expressions, adding a sense of atmosphere, and selling characters. If you want to read a book with a compact plot, less nonsense, and not too many expressions, I can give you some tips on how to avoid lightning in book selection, and you can filter out this kind of nonsense at a glance.
Too complicated, too many explanations, everything is explained so clearly, it seems annoying
Apart from some flaws in the details, it's still pretty good. It's a pity that it's unfinished. Finally, the settings of Qin and the Six Kingdoms are somewhat new and can be read as a separate book
The beginning was good, but the ending was too watery [I tilted my head and laughed and cried] so I picked it up in a hurry.
My grades are so bad that I can't write any more. I have no choice but to end. I'm very sorry. The chapter of the battle between good and evil basically ends here, and the sequel is the story of the male protagonist leaving this fairyland to practice elsewhere, which is equivalent to the end of the human world chapter...
This book is completely nonsense. In other immortal cultivation novels, you are just a low-level laborer in practicing qi. But here you are already a master, and to practice qi you have to make alchemy by yourself. Why do you need an alchemist?