[Beast World + 1vn + Farming + Xiongjing Shura Field + Group Pet]
As soon as Jiang Wan opened her eyes, she transformed into the most vicious and mischievous woman in the tribe.
The original owner was not only lazy and selfish, but the five potentials assigned to her by the tribe were unlimited.
But now, the crippled, weak, sick, blind, and mute beastmen are used as slaves, and they are abused until all of them turn black.
When she was thrown into the wasteland by them, waiting to be torn apart by ferocious beasts, the [God-level Tribe Leader Development System] awakened!
Jiang Wan's eyes lit up: Isn't this my professional counterpart?
Jiang Wan just wants to invest in the beastmen as the best projects and establish the first civilization in the world of beasts as soon as possible.
But her feeding, treatment, and care purely for rebates turned out to be clumsy and affectionate redemption in the eyes of the blackened beastmen.
Gradually, the beastmen's eyes became more and more strange.
Snow Wolf: "Master, my fur is the warmest. Please stop looking at that stupid tiger."
White Tiger: "I am your sharpest blade. Whoever dares to covet you, I will tear into pieces!"
Red Fox: "My eyes can only see you, and my wisdom can only be used by you."
Black Snake: "... Tang."
Black Hawk: "Sing for you, my god."
When Jiang Wan finally built a god-level tribe, there were many top beast kings kneeling behind her, just begging her to take a look.
Her first five defective beast husbands have long since become her most loyal, paranoid, and crazy patron saints.
Jiang Wan:? I just wanted to build infrastructure, why did I become the White Moonlight of Ten Thousand Beasts?
The plot is confusing, the language is unclear, and the story is reversed, so read with caution! There are so many descriptions of expressions that it makes me tired just looking at them
The plot is okay, but some parts are repeated twice. There are also some typos.
I haven't read such a crazy article in a long time. The content is repetitive or even completely confusing. Aren't foxes blind? Why let him do the work of writing records? Isn't the eagle mute? How could he describe the enemy's situation in words? Isn't the tiger lame? The beast's core is still broken, and the heroine doesn't heal him. How come he becomes the god of war of the tribe later on? And how come the sick and lone wolf we promised became the strongest assassin? In a certain chapter, even the Flame Lion suddenly became the heroine's beast husband, and whether it was the White Mountain Tribe or the Black Mountain Tribe, these two names appeared alternately many times. When the heroine met the tribal leader for the first time, the book described the heroine as a sacrifice picked up from the edge of the black forest and the leader's adopted daughter. Later, it was said that when the leader saw her, it was as if he was looking at another person through her. Later, the leader asked the heroine to be a goddess, or even the leader of the tribe. After that, the leader never even appeared again. Everything makes me question the author's writing status. It's normal for several beast husbands to compete for favor in Beast World, but like this fox who is wreaking havoc and stirring up dissension within the tribe, even at the expense of the tribe's safety, is that enough? They are no longer competing for favor, they are completely seizing power. It makes me feel like I am watching a large-scale workplace drama. The story about the world of beasts should at least talk about the relationship between the beast husband and the female protagonist. Just like the one between the female protagonist and the big tiger at the beginning, why did it completely change the tone of the story?
It's like a studio move, and the writing is super bad. How can I write a novel that makes me feel disgusting? I can't find it. If it doesn't work, you can find an AI to train it.
Why does the plot always feel a bit repetitive?
It's very confusing in some places, I wrote the same plot twice
The character design is good, but didn't the author read it himself after writing it? It's all repetitive, and I feel like I was just dreaming about which sentence to write. It really affects the look and feel. I hope I can improve it myself.
Why do I set up the one-handed mode to prompt me to click on the left side to turn pages automatically, but even if I click on the left side for a long time, it doesn't work [crying]
What? The plot behind it is so confusing. I just finished watching it and repeated it again.
Can the author take a look at what he wrote? It's a mess.
The plot is confusing, the language is unclear, and the story is reversed, so read with caution! There are so many descriptions of expressions that it makes me tired just looking at them
The plot is okay, but some parts are repeated twice. There are also some typos.
I haven't read such a crazy article in a long time. The content is repetitive or even completely confusing. Aren't foxes blind? Why let him do the work of writing records? Isn't the eagle mute? How could he describe the enemy's situation in words? Isn't the tiger lame? The beast's core is still broken, and the heroine doesn't heal him. How come he becomes the god of war of the tribe later on? And how come the sick and lone wolf we promised became the strongest assassin? In a certain chapter, even the Flame Lion suddenly became the heroine's beast husband, and whether it was the White Mountain Tribe or the Black Mountain Tribe, these two names appeared alternately many times. When the heroine met the tribal leader for the first time, the book described the heroine as a sacrifice picked up from the edge of the black forest and the leader's adopted daughter. Later, it was said that when the leader saw her, it was as if he was looking at another person through her. Later, the leader asked the heroine to be a goddess, or even the leader of the tribe. After that, the leader never even appeared again. Everything makes me question the author's writing status. It's normal for several beast husbands to compete for favor in Beast World, but like this fox who is wreaking havoc and stirring up dissension within the tribe, even at the expense of the tribe's safety, is that enough? They are no longer competing for favor, they are completely seizing power. It makes me feel like I am watching a large-scale workplace drama. The story about the world of beasts should at least talk about the relationship between the beast husband and the female protagonist. Just like the one between the female protagonist and the big tiger at the beginning, why did it completely change the tone of the story?
It's like a studio move, and the writing is super bad. How can I write a novel that makes me feel disgusting? I can't find it. If it doesn't work, you can find an AI to train it.
Why does the plot always feel a bit repetitive?
It's very confusing in some places, I wrote the same plot twice
The character design is good, but didn't the author read it himself after writing it? It's all repetitive, and I feel like I was just dreaming about which sentence to write. It really affects the look and feel. I hope I can improve it myself.
Why do I set up the one-handed mode to prompt me to click on the left side to turn pages automatically, but even if I click on the left side for a long time, it doesn't work [crying]
What? The plot behind it is so confusing. I just finished watching it and repeated it again.
Can the author take a look at what he wrote? It's a mess.