Live Broadcast to the Underworld, the Top Guy on the List Smashed Out Hundreds of Millions of Hell Coins

I felt so aggrieved after reading this article that I almost felt depressed. The heroine is strong. Stupid, stupid. And that detective boss? One more time, two more times, no more three times. Always there questioning who I really was. Then let's talk about the client who came to her for fortune-telling. Luo Liba Suo just doesn't believe it, so why are we still looking for you? Then those ghost clients who are looking for you are really crazy, all of them are so crazy. Saw 40. There is no story that makes me happy from beginning to end. Every story has a few crazies. Looking for trouble. Questioning. Can't you respect other people's fate? For someone like me who is used to reading cool stories, it would be understandable if the heroine is not strong, she is strong, stupid and dumb. It feels like every customer is asking for it. If you want to read cool articles, don't come in.

The ending is a bit abrupt and many things are left unwritten. I hope the author can continue writing a second part.

The early stages were exciting, and the male and female protagonists were also very popular, but the ending was a mess, with many pitfalls left unfilled and the ending rushed.

The beginning is really good, the ending is inexplicable

I didn't expect that who would be the boss behind the scenes. It's just a bit baffling. The heroine is possessed by Conan. There are murders wherever she goes.

The writing in the front is very good, but some parts in the back are unreasonable and the ending is not perfect.

It's a bit far-fetched. The villain behind the scenes is so vicious. He wipes out the whole family and vomits blood. He also wants to kill the heroine. In the end, he dies so lightly. It's an anticlimax.

I have watched less than half of it. Captain Zhao is a positive person and the captain of the criminal investigation team. Even if you say that the team members cannot come into contact with the special department, he already knows that Chen is a member of the special department and has experienced Yan Ling's two live broadcast cases. Just like this, facing the dead victim and facing the victim's experience directly through the heroine's means, he still insists on not overturning the case, and does not think that these supernatural beings are true or false. Later, it is written that the heroine Ping Anfu is thrown into the trash can. Is this written so that I will not listen to the protagonist and suffer the consequences? Another small flaw is that during the live broadcast, the person online will have a monologue to talk about how he was killed or something. It feels like it would be better to integrate these monologues into a dialogue form, but they are just a bit out of the drama. Overall, it was Zhao's character that persuaded me to quit.

In fact, the idea is very good. If you continue writing, you will gradually gain many readers. The short stories in it are all very cliché and can connect the underworld with the dead. This can actually be written well. For example, you can also watch the live broadcast in the underworld, and you can also post different color barrages? It really shouldn't have ended so early. Many holes have not been filled. Author, even if the results are not good, we still have so many readers following it. It is really not good to end it so hastily! The heroine's merits have not yet been perfected. The Empress Temple saw the connection with the male protagonist earlier, but did not explain it, nor did it say what will happen after the merits are perfected. Even the male protagonist hasn't recovered his memory yet... In your case of the Yan family's extermination, the Mo family, and the Jiang family being persecuted, even if you say it was Chen Zebin who did it, you still have to explain how it was done...

It's a pity that I looked too far ahead. The ending was too hasty, but it does not affect the content of the entire book. It did not explain the follow-up of Mo Xuan and Yan Ling, which I really want to read.