Mortal: Pick up an Immortal Cauldron at the Beginning

I couldn't find a hatchet, and I couldn't pick up a wooden stick either.

⬆The novel reveals the secrets of the art world, vividly showing the conflict between creation and business, and the persistence of ideals is moving.

It can be seen that the writing is written with care, but the writing style and logic still need to be improved.

Brainy or not, the plot and concept are still attractive, but the writing style is too cumbersome. Maybe the author pays too much attention to the number of words instead of creating an atmosphere. Often when seeing tension, there are always some cumbersome and meaningless sentences, like a plate of cold water, which affects the sense of reading...

What is Lin Fan doing with Liu Yiyi? Liu Yiyi still has a child!

This book is well written and worth reading!

No matter what book you write, remember to bring it with you

⬆️ It's addictive right from the beginning, and it's worth staying up late to finish.

The beginning of the chapter is good, but there are also a lot of Mao Dun. Keep writing it well, come on

Why don't you run away? The world is so big. Let's find another place.