Traveling to the Qin Dynasty, I discovered that I was Fusu's son Ziying. In order to prevent my father from being demoted to the north and causing tragedy, I tried hard to see my grandfather Qin Shihuang, whom I had not seen for more than ten years. Unexpectedly, Qin Shihuang refused to meet him, but he happened to meet the moody Lao Deng.
"Lao Deng, Qin Shihuang is violent and murderous, so don't get close to him."
"Lao Deng, Qin Shihuang is a short-lived man who took pills. Don't imitate him."
"Lao Deng, I'm telling you secretly! Qin Shihuang will die in the sand dunes, and Zhao Gao will tamper with the imperial edict to make Hu Hai succeed him. You can't tell others."
Lao Deng said: "Is there a possibility that I am Qin Shihuang, the short-lived ghost in your mouth?"
The writing is too far-fetched, some plots have to be forced, and it's not rigorous enough. It's tiring to watch.
That's okay, but in fact Ziying is not Fusu's son. He should be Qin Shihuang's nephew.
Also, Ziying should be a title in the records, his name is only Ying
Don't collapse. If it doesn't collapse, it will be a good book. I feel like I started to use AI to write it later, and it started to feel a bit wrong.
The book is okay but short-lived
Well enough. Voted for you
I probably haven't mentioned it yet. First there was the straight-column plow and then there was the curved-column plow.
The writing is too far-fetched, some plots have to be forced, and it's not rigorous enough. It's tiring to watch.
That's okay, but in fact Ziying is not Fusu's son. He should be Qin Shihuang's nephew. Also, Ziying should be a title in the records, his name is only Ying
Don't collapse. If it doesn't collapse, it will be a good book. I feel like I started to use AI to write it later, and it started to feel a bit wrong.
The book is okay but short-lived
Well enough. Voted for you
I probably haven't mentioned it yet. First there was the straight-column plow and then there was the curved-column plow.
It's okay for the time being, come on, author!