Nancheng Heroes: My Counterattack

⬆️The imagination of this book is rich and unconstrained.

Author, why do you insist that Xiaoyun leave Ni? This kind of love is very precious. Why, alas

I'm afraid the author was invited to have tea.

If Zhang Xiaoyun appears again later, the story idea can actually be written like this: Zhang Xiaoyun originally wanted to commit himself to his benefactor to repay his benefactor for his help, but Zhang Xiaoyun was pregnant, so the two failed. Writing in this way gives Zhang Xiaoyun a reason to return later, and it also makes it easier to clarify the relationship between her and her benefactor, and is more easily accepted by readers. After all, the reasons for her departure are somewhat unacceptable to me. Because a third party joined her when she left. If she later returns and joins the male protagonist's harem, her relationship with her benefactor will be somewhat untied and chaotic, which will cause trouble for the male protagonist and the readers. The readers don't want to see such a plot unfold. According to the story idea I gave, there will be no such trouble.

Zhang Xiaoyun should not appear again in the future. I always feel that the reason for her leaving is a bit unacceptable. If you leave, just leave and don't show up again. Even if you show up again later, it will only add trouble and sadness, so don't show up again. After all, when you left, other people's kindness to her was involved, and it would be difficult for her to break off the relationship with her benefactor later, so it would be meaningless for her to show up again. But if the relationship between her and her benefactor was written as a sworn brother and sister, it would be okay to appear again!

The plot is wonderful, and it is nostalgic for the 1980s and 1990s, when people's minds were changing, friendship was priceless, material desires were rampant, heroes were saddened by beauty, and Dongguan was a city of erotica, where countless crazy men and women, money, beauty, love and hatred, swords and blood, reality and fantasy were intertwined, a good story, and it was a bit true! ! !

It's really good. It's not witty and the plot is pretty good.

I hope this Zhang Xiaoyun will appear later, otherwise it will be unfinished.

Can there be more updates? It's pretty good-looking.

Oh, I still have a knife. I hope it doesn't end badly.