Wear books to become a classic dog-licking villain?
Lin Ye said: I won't act in this script anymore!
He refused to be a bitch, but accidentally activated the [Villain Counterattack System].
By plundering the opportunity of the Destiny Child and triggering negative emotions in important characters, you can exchange it for god-level driving skills and heavenly technology!
He forced Su Rou to return hundreds of millions of dollars in property and asked the iceberg goddess to lower her head and call "Master".
He slapped Wen Chengyu, the male protagonist of Destiny, in public, tearing apart his disguise as a "civilian genius" and leaving him without the courage to resist.
From then on, Lin Ye was no longer a stepping stone, but the ultimate villain who stepped on the fate of the male and female protagonists to reach the top!
With god-level driving skills and hundreds of billions of assets at your side, no matter you are an A-level robot girl or a child of destiny, you have to be his stepping stone to become stronger!
Why doesn't the machine girl take on a tool form [anxiety]?
It's great not to have a brain, but it feels so weird to have a brain, and many places are very contradictory. My brain has been working so well lately. Give up first. Or I came back to read it when I lost my mind that day.
There are too many errors and omissions, including plot and description conflicts, typos, etc. There are too many inconsistencies or large and small omissions. As I read, I was distracted by this, and the reading experience was not good. Just to give a few examples:
1. Chapter 13, Destiny Man sent a message to Rou Green Tea (for the first time, online) to tell the story; but when Rou Green Tea received the message, he accepted Destiny Man's offline visit application, and the two of them conspired directly in person.
2. When Destiny Man first appeared on the scene (before he had a relationship with Rou Green Tea), it was already set that he was bound to an A-level mecha girl (let's call her A1), but it was never revealed who this A1 was. By Chapter 28, in the gambling battle between Destiny Man and the protagonist, Destiny Man's A1 mecha was not mentioned at all. Instead, he drove his classmate "Rou Green Tea" who had already recognized the protagonist as the main character. (Although the previous two people conspired, they did not sign a contract). I don't know how to complain about this move. Is there too many flaws in it? Where did Destiny Man's A1 go? Who was he driving before he got on the line with Rou Green Tea? How did Rou Green Tea recognize the owner? The protagonist accepted the slave to work for his opponent in front of the whole school, but no one thought there was a problem and the protagonist accepted it by default? What the hell? ?
3. In Chapter 33, the protagonist's spiritual contract (equivalent to a spouse) and sister "Xingkong" suddenly changed their name to "Master", and directly switched from the title to the behavior to the slave style. What if the protagonist didn't feel calm and completed the switch? ? No, your character and positioning are broken, author!
Hey, there are so many problematic places that I have forgotten after reading them. Some have written paragraphs of comments, but there are so many small mistakes that I just can't be bothered to remember them. There are too many.
Gao Wu and other things are still acceptable. This kind of boat girl. The machine girl is really bad
Too abstract, confusing, and ugly
How many books of this type are there? I can't even copy them clearly.
Brother, please go through the settings carefully. It's too messy. Not all humans have come out.
Dear author, I just have a few questions to ask:
1: What about the little machine girl that was brought into the game? Did she forget it on the battlefield?
2: Is the mecha better B+ or C? How to classify it?
3: How to classify whether a person is a level 3 warrior warrior or a level 2 warrior?
4. Why can "humans" leave the warehouse to check their own injuries when the mecha is in its mecha form? Then what is this thing that comes out?
I hope the author's articles will get better and better
More logical and overall more coherent
<(￣￣)>
Please update the author soon, I still want to read it
Why doesn't the machine girl take on a tool form [anxiety]?
It's great not to have a brain, but it feels so weird to have a brain, and many places are very contradictory. My brain has been working so well lately. Give up first. Or I came back to read it when I lost my mind that day.
There are too many errors and omissions, including plot and description conflicts, typos, etc. There are too many inconsistencies or large and small omissions. As I read, I was distracted by this, and the reading experience was not good. Just to give a few examples: 1. Chapter 13, Destiny Man sent a message to Rou Green Tea (for the first time, online) to tell the story; but when Rou Green Tea received the message, he accepted Destiny Man's offline visit application, and the two of them conspired directly in person. 2. When Destiny Man first appeared on the scene (before he had a relationship with Rou Green Tea), it was already set that he was bound to an A-level mecha girl (let's call her A1), but it was never revealed who this A1 was. By Chapter 28, in the gambling battle between Destiny Man and the protagonist, Destiny Man's A1 mecha was not mentioned at all. Instead, he drove his classmate "Rou Green Tea" who had already recognized the protagonist as the main character. (Although the previous two people conspired, they did not sign a contract). I don't know how to complain about this move. Is there too many flaws in it? Where did Destiny Man's A1 go? Who was he driving before he got on the line with Rou Green Tea? How did Rou Green Tea recognize the owner? The protagonist accepted the slave to work for his opponent in front of the whole school, but no one thought there was a problem and the protagonist accepted it by default? What the hell? ? 3. In Chapter 33, the protagonist's spiritual contract (equivalent to a spouse) and sister "Xingkong" suddenly changed their name to "Master", and directly switched from the title to the behavior to the slave style. What if the protagonist didn't feel calm and completed the switch? ? No, your character and positioning are broken, author! Hey, there are so many problematic places that I have forgotten after reading them. Some have written paragraphs of comments, but there are so many small mistakes that I just can't be bothered to remember them. There are too many.
Gao Wu and other things are still acceptable. This kind of boat girl. The machine girl is really bad
Too abstract, confusing, and ugly
How many books of this type are there? I can't even copy them clearly.
Brother, please go through the settings carefully. It's too messy. Not all humans have come out.
Dear author, I just have a few questions to ask: 1: What about the little machine girl that was brought into the game? Did she forget it on the battlefield? 2: Is the mecha better B+ or C? How to classify it? 3: How to classify whether a person is a level 3 warrior warrior or a level 2 warrior? 4. Why can "humans" leave the warehouse to check their own injuries when the mecha is in its mecha form? Then what is this thing that comes out? I hope the author's articles will get better and better More logical and overall more coherent <(￣￣)>
Please update the author soon, I still want to read it
Can the author update three times a day?