[The early chapters aren't easy: no one dotes on the protagonist, it's a gradual-growth story with angst. Don't go by the tags. If you want nothing but feel-good wish fulfillment, this isn't for you.]
[Signed for publication]
[Romance included. The male lead is Jinyuan. The female lead isn't a strong, dominant heroine; she's imperfect and has flaws.]
Bai Lin discovers that she's the foil to her sect's beloved junior sister.
The junior sister is delicate and kind, while Bai Lin is cold-blooded and heartless.
The junior sister is loved by everyone despite having only average talent, while Bai Lin trains desperately and is still despised.
One tear from the junior sister makes the whole sect ache for her, while Bai Lin's grave injuries and bloody cough earn her nothing but, “Don't interfere with Junior Sister's cultivation.”
In the end, Bai Lin dies a horrific death, while someone gently covers the junior sister's eyes.
So Bai Lin gives up trying and decides to become a good-for-nothing just like her junior sister.
Cultivate? Not a chance! Being useless is the easy life!
Who could have guessed that once she started lying flat, the very people who were supposed to hate her would panic?
“Without you, our sect will lose the tournament! Junior Sister can't do it!”
“You're the one and only genius in the sect. How can you sell yourself short?”
“How are we supposed to pass this academy's test? Please, cultivate with us and show us how!”
The junior sister meant to use Bai Lin as a stepping stone. But when she stepped down, she found Bai Lin was nothing but a heap of mud.
Junior Sister: “Go cultivate! Aren't you a genius?”
Bai Lin: “Huh? Me? I'm a good-for-nothing.”
The most meaningless and most annoying hours in my life. After reading the previous dozens of chapters, I felt like I was going to get angry and die in the next second. I don't understand why the writing was so slow. Even if it was slow, it was still written in such an ugly way. One second it was the same plot, and the next second it was cut to another plot. How could the pacing be so poorly controlled? It feels like it's just an article about torturing women, but it can still be labeled as a group pet? ? Where is the group pet? The change in the relationship line is also very inexplicable. Every supporting character in it regrets something after bullying the heroine. In the next second, he is still bullying the heroine. The heroine is also acting like a mute. Do you want to be more cowardly? Every supporting character feels like they've been robbed, especially those senior brothers. I don't understand what's wrong with Nings and this author. Please practice your writing and plot.
It's a waste of time. I should have read the comments to clear up mines. I watched it for a long time and was completely frustrated. The heroine is very cute, but it would be better to just write the heroine to death.
It's well written, not bad, but it's not to my taste. This is my problem, not the novel's.
The emotional lines are all skipping, abrupt and boring, and not as good as the bond with the first generation Lin Chuyao.
It's super cool and every character is very interesting! The demon world and the demon world are all very fun! ! !
As the introduction says, the first part of the book is not relaxing at all, at least it's still very frustrating (in my opinion) for more than 150 chapters. As the author said, if you want to read a pure and refreshing novel, don't read it. The heroine's feelings for the hero are quite unexpected.
The first half is quite fun, the emotional line is a bit hard to push, but Bai Lin's growth line is okay.
The plot is not very interesting once Lin Chuyao's original identity is found, her combat power collapses, the male protagonist's portrayal is a bit weird, and his style of life has a faint Jiahao flavor. Although it can be seen that it is to show that he is a demon king and is awesome, but it is a bit annoying when the awesomeness is overdone...
I reluctantly finished reading it, but I still think the growth line is interesting... And the relationship between the original body and the original Bai Lin is mildly interesting.
It's a very strange article. Different parts have different audiences when taken separately, and the connection between each part is also very poor. The beginning of the sect chapter can be regarded as a frustrating growth line. It was already obvious that the heroine was not doing well, but the sect leader still had to observe it. After dozens of chapters, he went round and round and gave it to the peak leader who knew from the beginning that the heroine was not doing well and felt sorry for the heroine who wanted the heroine to be his apprentice... As soon as the true face of the vicious female supporting character was revealed, he changed the map, or covered his mouth and changed the map, and gave the vicious female supporting character time to bewitch normal people and grow up. Later, when he came back from the map of the demon world, he strangled the trouble raised by the vicious female supporting character for a second time... The emotional drama between the male and female protagonists in the Demon World chapter is very blunt. The female protagonist went from being a pathetic little snail to enlightenment and realized that she likes the male protagonist. Also, when she first started to practice Chaos Spiritual Power, she forgot about the Five Elements Spiritual Power. It took her three years to complete the replacement of the Spiritual Power. What should I do if she suddenly worries that her Five Elements Spiritual Power can no longer be used? There are also some inconsistencies in the plot. At the beginning, it was said that the soul of the evil female partner was cut into a piece for perverts to experiment on. When the evil female partner here was finally completely dead, it was suddenly said that the evil female partner in the fragment over there was the original soul, and the soul that was finally killed was a clone soul that was no different from the original body. In the previous chapters of Demon World and Return, the male and female protagonists were written as conjoined twins. The male protagonist would be attacked from time to time, and when the female protagonist needed to observe, the author suddenly stopped writing the male protagonist, and forgot about the male protagonist for dozens of chapters. In the process, he also added a large light Lily line with a strong bond between the female protagonist and the original female partner in the first life... The author's writing ideas are extremely confusing. He only cares about digging holes and filling in holes and setting up, without caring about the smoothness of reading and the reader's tonality. Reading the book reviews, we can also see that there are quite a few people who give up on writing. . That's all I've seen, please be careful.
I didn't want to read it until I reached Chapter 50. I just didn't want Lin Chuyao to die.
Not only is the heroine's design split, but the other characters' designs are also inconsistent. I understand what the author wants to express, but the plot logic is not very reasonable. It's a bit reversal for the sake of reversal.
The most meaningless and most annoying hours in my life. After reading the previous dozens of chapters, I felt like I was going to get angry and die in the next second. I don't understand why the writing was so slow. Even if it was slow, it was still written in such an ugly way. One second it was the same plot, and the next second it was cut to another plot. How could the pacing be so poorly controlled? It feels like it's just an article about torturing women, but it can still be labeled as a group pet? ? Where is the group pet? The change in the relationship line is also very inexplicable. Every supporting character in it regrets something after bullying the heroine. In the next second, he is still bullying the heroine. The heroine is also acting like a mute. Do you want to be more cowardly? Every supporting character feels like they've been robbed, especially those senior brothers. I don't understand what's wrong with Nings and this author. Please practice your writing and plot.
It's a waste of time. I should have read the comments to clear up mines. I watched it for a long time and was completely frustrated. The heroine is very cute, but it would be better to just write the heroine to death.
It's well written, not bad, but it's not to my taste. This is my problem, not the novel's.
The emotional lines are all skipping, abrupt and boring, and not as good as the bond with the first generation Lin Chuyao.
It's super cool and every character is very interesting! The demon world and the demon world are all very fun! ! !
As the introduction says, the first part of the book is not relaxing at all, at least it's still very frustrating (in my opinion) for more than 150 chapters. As the author said, if you want to read a pure and refreshing novel, don't read it. The heroine's feelings for the hero are quite unexpected.
The first half is quite fun, the emotional line is a bit hard to push, but Bai Lin's growth line is okay. The plot is not very interesting once Lin Chuyao's original identity is found, her combat power collapses, the male protagonist's portrayal is a bit weird, and his style of life has a faint Jiahao flavor. Although it can be seen that it is to show that he is a demon king and is awesome, but it is a bit annoying when the awesomeness is overdone... I reluctantly finished reading it, but I still think the growth line is interesting... And the relationship between the original body and the original Bai Lin is mildly interesting.
It's a very strange article. Different parts have different audiences when taken separately, and the connection between each part is also very poor. The beginning of the sect chapter can be regarded as a frustrating growth line. It was already obvious that the heroine was not doing well, but the sect leader still had to observe it. After dozens of chapters, he went round and round and gave it to the peak leader who knew from the beginning that the heroine was not doing well and felt sorry for the heroine who wanted the heroine to be his apprentice... As soon as the true face of the vicious female supporting character was revealed, he changed the map, or covered his mouth and changed the map, and gave the vicious female supporting character time to bewitch normal people and grow up. Later, when he came back from the map of the demon world, he strangled the trouble raised by the vicious female supporting character for a second time... The emotional drama between the male and female protagonists in the Demon World chapter is very blunt. The female protagonist went from being a pathetic little snail to enlightenment and realized that she likes the male protagonist. Also, when she first started to practice Chaos Spiritual Power, she forgot about the Five Elements Spiritual Power. It took her three years to complete the replacement of the Spiritual Power. What should I do if she suddenly worries that her Five Elements Spiritual Power can no longer be used? There are also some inconsistencies in the plot. At the beginning, it was said that the soul of the evil female partner was cut into a piece for perverts to experiment on. When the evil female partner here was finally completely dead, it was suddenly said that the evil female partner in the fragment over there was the original soul, and the soul that was finally killed was a clone soul that was no different from the original body. In the previous chapters of Demon World and Return, the male and female protagonists were written as conjoined twins. The male protagonist would be attacked from time to time, and when the female protagonist needed to observe, the author suddenly stopped writing the male protagonist, and forgot about the male protagonist for dozens of chapters. In the process, he also added a large light Lily line with a strong bond between the female protagonist and the original female partner in the first life... The author's writing ideas are extremely confusing. He only cares about digging holes and filling in holes and setting up, without caring about the smoothness of reading and the reader's tonality. Reading the book reviews, we can also see that there are quite a few people who give up on writing. . That's all I've seen, please be careful.
I didn't want to read it until I reached Chapter 50. I just didn't want Lin Chuyao to die.
Not only is the heroine's design split, but the other characters' designs are also inconsistent. I understand what the author wants to express, but the plot logic is not very reasonable. It's a bit reversal for the sake of reversal.