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I took the elderly out to play today. I didn't have time to modify it and will send it out tomorrow. Happy National Day to everyone!
Some of my suggestions~
If the author can write down the cause and effect, the heroine can accept it as she pleases, as long as it is reasonable. You can give some concessions to the heroines on Blue Pole Star, because some heroines really don't need to be involved (Su Ling'er, Feng Xue'er, Xia Qingyue, Xiao Lengxi, these can all be given to Teddy) But in the God Realm, except for the two already bound Caizhi Jasmine, all other heroines should not be given over to Teddy (after all, most of the outstanding heroines are in the God Realm). The heroine of Abyss is currently only able to portray profound characters in painting colored glass and painting clear shadows. It's really hard to draw conclusions about anything else. In addition, in addition to pushing the main plot, the protagonist can also write more plots about exploring the chaotic world with the heroines. They can hunt for treasures in secret realms together, or they can travel together and talk about the beauty and beauty of this world. The protagonist can also occasionally show his hands. The heroines can pretend to be a b in front of the heroines. They don't want to see boring promotions and acquisitions of girls and then disappearing and hanging up. The female protagonists and male protagonists have more interactions with the world. I can see that you have the idea of writing in this aspect, but the writing is a bit conservative. You should write more about daily life in this aspect, definitely more than others (because you cannot deny that the purpose of most people watching Evil God fanfics is to give these female protagonists a different life, hoping to see a happier female protagonist) Therefore, the protagonist must not only be brave, resourceful and responsible, but also have some creative things of his own that make people shine (Flying Teddy, with the most awesome physique and inheritance results in the entire chaotic world, only created a method of using the Heavenly Tribulation Thunder, and is completely unqualified to have these), and he must not be ughhhhhhhhhh when something happens, ( It can be seen that you want to write a male protagonist like Shi Hao. Since you are a male protagonist, you must be ruthless and live a lot. In addition to some necessary resource inheritance for the relationship with the female protagonist, you should be able to take as little as possible from other foreign objects. It is best to kill the demon physique together and rely on your own strength to stamp Teddy in the face.) That's all for now.
Zi Ji's wife, a human wife, is also the only woman among the four holy masters of Tianxuan Continent, tsk tsk tsk tsk tsk tsk tsk tsk tsk tsk tsk tsk tsk
Author, I think the charm of Haihuang Qu Fengyi in Supreme Sea Palace is still there. Can you take a look...
It is rare to see such a detailed characterization, a deeply rooted and very good novel.
Author, please don't do it with Yun Che. If you want to do it, you have to do it with the protagonist.
When did Yun Che get Jade Phoenix? Xia Qingyue
Yun Che has the Holy Body of Nothingness and the Ancestral God Xiao Lingxi. His future level of profound strength should be very high.
Author, I just want to ask how many chapters are left to win Xuanyuan Yufeng? All the flowers I waited for have faded.
I hope that Yun Che's heroine can be taken down, and the emotional aspects can be written more smoothly, without making the emotions too abrupt, which would be perfect. I hope the author will work hard and wish everything goes well!