[Cultivating Immortality in Old Age + Multiple Female Characters + Unstoppable Power + Pure Wish Fulfillment]
He transmigrates as the sole heir of the Divine Clan, with endless wealth but no cultivation to speak of, and he's a decrepit old man with little time left to live? Good thing he married nine stunning female emperors! Except all nine of his wives are plotting to inherit his estate! Just as his lifespan is about to run out, the “Ten Thousandfold Gift System” activates!
[Ding! The Human Empress Mu Qingyu has gifted the Host one Yang-Restoring Pill. Congratulations, Host, you have gained a hundred years of life!]
[Ding! The Fox Empress Yan Hongyi has gifted the Host one red silk of bliss. Congratulations, Host, you have stolen the laws of the Emperor Realm and your cultivation has surged!]
Watching the empresses scramble to “murder their own husband,” Ye Qingfeng laughs. Come on, let's hurt each other and see who gives in first!
There are too many loopholes, and the heroine is seriously missing. The later chapters will be completely scrapped. Even one of the heroines, Leng Xinyue, is not confiscated. It looks disgusting later on.
What could have been explained clearly in one sentence was broken into countless times by you.
It looks good, and the writing content is very enjoyable, but some small details are not handled properly.
This book is really good. It's really interesting. I like it.
I saw 143, open high and go low
The protagonist currently has three appearances. In the early stage, when his lifespan is short and his cultivation is low, he is a ghost spirit with a bit of a licking dog. In the middle stage, his strength recovers and he becomes a pendulum with vicious eyes. After he ascends, he is a flexible and flexible smiling tiger.
In the early stage, there were too few plots, or there were too few characters, or mistakes were made. I wrote a lot of characters that I hated and didn't dare to kill, such as Tianquan, Mu Lingxi, and Mo Dao's wife. I owe it to Tianquan, who always plotted against the protagonist. I think the author can't just consider the logic of your book when writing. , Readers will more or less take in that characters like these who have repeatedly plotted against the protagonist must be killed to vent their anger, including Mu Lingxi, who has a pure xnn mentality. Fortunately, you were cleared in the end, but in the early stage, because of your characters, your status was too high and you did not dare to kill. It was quite annoying to watch.
In the middle period, there are a lot of Karas who can be killed. The impression in the middle period is good. It is a standard invincible cool novel. The tone is smooth, whitewash what needs to be cleaned up, and kill what needs to be killed. I spent money in the early stage and couldn't get the wife's sincerity. I got a few in the middle period, but to be honest, it was too slow. With nine wives, you can write a character who exchanges sincerity for sincerity in the early stage. As a result, you only focus on writing in the middle stage.
It's hard to comment on the plot of the later ascension. It's the worst ascension process, which means clearing all the previous basics and starting over, without any sense of familiarity. It's difficult to go from luxury to frugality. You can reduce the protagonist's situation appropriately, but in the end, you directly make the protagonist worse than he was in the beginning. My personal desire to watch here is basically gone. Rhythm is very important. You have to kill what needs to be killed, eat what needs to be eaten, and the nutritional intake must be even. The same goes for writing a book.
This novel The Great Emperor and Tiandao is really worthless
A short composition about soul passing through and seizing the body. Match one!
I really want to laugh. God will protect everything. Those who are higher than the protagonist's cultivation level will be protected by Heaven. Marriage is also the same. As long as the wife is in bed and has no ability to do anything, the Emperor will do it when he goes out. The shield around the protagonist will rebound automatically. He has the ability to bring the dead back to life, but he can't cure the protagonist's constitution. He will always be a mortal. If he is with his wife, his realm will be as high as he wants.
The protagonist's life, my dream, when will I have nine wives?
The summary is to open high and go low
There are too many loopholes, and the heroine is seriously missing. The later chapters will be completely scrapped. Even one of the heroines, Leng Xinyue, is not confiscated. It looks disgusting later on.
What could have been explained clearly in one sentence was broken into countless times by you.
It looks good, and the writing content is very enjoyable, but some small details are not handled properly.
This book is really good. It's really interesting. I like it.
I saw 143, open high and go low The protagonist currently has three appearances. In the early stage, when his lifespan is short and his cultivation is low, he is a ghost spirit with a bit of a licking dog. In the middle stage, his strength recovers and he becomes a pendulum with vicious eyes. After he ascends, he is a flexible and flexible smiling tiger. In the early stage, there were too few plots, or there were too few characters, or mistakes were made. I wrote a lot of characters that I hated and didn't dare to kill, such as Tianquan, Mu Lingxi, and Mo Dao's wife. I owe it to Tianquan, who always plotted against the protagonist. I think the author can't just consider the logic of your book when writing. , Readers will more or less take in that characters like these who have repeatedly plotted against the protagonist must be killed to vent their anger, including Mu Lingxi, who has a pure xnn mentality. Fortunately, you were cleared in the end, but in the early stage, because of your characters, your status was too high and you did not dare to kill. It was quite annoying to watch. In the middle period, there are a lot of Karas who can be killed. The impression in the middle period is good. It is a standard invincible cool novel. The tone is smooth, whitewash what needs to be cleaned up, and kill what needs to be killed. I spent money in the early stage and couldn't get the wife's sincerity. I got a few in the middle period, but to be honest, it was too slow. With nine wives, you can write a character who exchanges sincerity for sincerity in the early stage. As a result, you only focus on writing in the middle stage. It's hard to comment on the plot of the later ascension. It's the worst ascension process, which means clearing all the previous basics and starting over, without any sense of familiarity. It's difficult to go from luxury to frugality. You can reduce the protagonist's situation appropriately, but in the end, you directly make the protagonist worse than he was in the beginning. My personal desire to watch here is basically gone. Rhythm is very important. You have to kill what needs to be killed, eat what needs to be eaten, and the nutritional intake must be even. The same goes for writing a book.
This novel The Great Emperor and Tiandao is really worthless
A short composition about soul passing through and seizing the body. Match one!
I really want to laugh. God will protect everything. Those who are higher than the protagonist's cultivation level will be protected by Heaven. Marriage is also the same. As long as the wife is in bed and has no ability to do anything, the Emperor will do it when he goes out. The shield around the protagonist will rebound automatically. He has the ability to bring the dead back to life, but he can't cure the protagonist's constitution. He will always be a mortal. If he is with his wife, his realm will be as high as he wants.
The protagonist's life, my dream, when will I have nine wives?