[In the ancient world of beasts, females were superior to males and males were inferior + the heart-throb Shura field + male competition 1vn]
Transformed into a vicious female from the world of beasts, Su Mingli was despised by all the beastmen. She had an ugly appearance and a cruel personality. She commandeered eight beastmen but left them with scars.
After unlocking the vicious female supporting system, the system said: Want to become beautiful? Take the blame first! Explode the disgust value like crazy!
She immediately started her performance: insulting the beastman as a waste, mocking the saint for her hypocrisy, and allowing the villagers to curse her.
He turned around and sneaked into the cave late at night, giving anti-inflammatory injections to the dying white wolf, sewing up the fatal wounds of the black wolf, secretly mixing the decoction of the weak Phoenix with the spiritual spring, healing the leg of a disabled leopard, and feeding medicine to treat the eyes of a blind tiger...
She blamed the saint and said, "My sister treated her, remember to thank her."
Until one day——
Bai Lang looked at her tenderly, his eyes full of love and doting: "How long will the wife pretend to be a villain?"
Hei Lang blushed and acted coquettishly, deliberately using his wolf ears to lure her into touching him: "I just took a shower, would you please touch me?"
Phoenix is loyal and infatuated: "I am willing to give everything to my wife."
The disabled leopard was willing to be her mount: "It was my wife who gave me a new life."
The blind tiger carefully licked her face: "My wife, please don't abandon me."
Later, Su Mingli tore off the fake saint's painting and spread her hair all over the beast world with her stunning beauty!
I always feel something is weird. After the heroine's face healed, the following paragraph is a bit incomprehensible. It's quite inexplicable.
It looks good, but there is some logic and inconsistency. It could be polished a bit more.
I've finished reading. There are a lot of things I haven't written yet. It's still too short.
It's not finished yet, I hope the author will write a great next article!
It still looks pretty good, but some details feel like they haven't been handled well. The plot is still okay. In some places, some plots and characters appear too abruptly, and there is a feeling of writing what comes to mind. The modern part is described too little, and there is no detailed description of the origin. In the end, there is no explanation of the father's identity, whereabouts, and whether the mother will come back. The supporting characters are a bit thin.
The author feels that your book is not particularly popular.
This fish's past will probably take several chapters to describe, so let's get some facts in!
It's enough to just describe the inner activities, but it will become boring if you talk about it in a long way.
Not bad, there is no content about female competition, which is gratifying, but it is too involved in modern society, always talking about past and present life, which makes people a little confused
It's pretty, but too short.
I always feel something is weird. After the heroine's face healed, the following paragraph is a bit incomprehensible. It's quite inexplicable.
It looks good, but there is some logic and inconsistency. It could be polished a bit more.
I've finished reading. There are a lot of things I haven't written yet. It's still too short.
It's not finished yet, I hope the author will write a great next article!
It still looks pretty good, but some details feel like they haven't been handled well. The plot is still okay. In some places, some plots and characters appear too abruptly, and there is a feeling of writing what comes to mind. The modern part is described too little, and there is no detailed description of the origin. In the end, there is no explanation of the father's identity, whereabouts, and whether the mother will come back. The supporting characters are a bit thin.
The author feels that your book is not particularly popular.
This fish's past will probably take several chapters to describe, so let's get some facts in!
It's enough to just describe the inner activities, but it will become boring if you talk about it in a long way.
Not bad, there is no content about female competition, which is gratifying, but it is too involved in modern society, always talking about past and present life, which makes people a little confused