My Family Cultivates Immortality, and I Am the Divine Tripod of the Clan.

The subject matter is good, but the plot is not coherent enough. There are too many character names that I can't remember or want to remember later. The number of appearances of the protagonist is too low. To be honest, the sense of immersion is not very good. Come on, author.

Author, your character settings and skill settings at the beginning are almost copied from the Xuanjian Immortal Clan [tilt head and laugh and cry][tilt head and laugh and cry], I hope you can write something different later.

What kind of guarantee did the author sign and how much is his monthly income? I also recently wanted to write about a family cultivating immortality, so I came here to ask for advice.

It looks good, I hope it can be updated for a long time

I like family cultivation novels, and I also like this kind of mortal flow. From ordinary to extraordinary, it describes every bit of life seriously. It has a strong sense of immersion. I hope I can keep it up. I am tired of reading such fast-paced and refreshing articles. Come on, author.

It's not okay to follow Xuanjian completely, right?

It's as plain as water. A group portrait article also needs to have a main line. At the same time, it shouldn't be without the protagonist for a long time, let alone this kind of writing method with a hammer here and a stick here and there. The impression is really not good.

As a whole, the Wang family is the protagonist, and the bronze tripod is only a support and does not steal the spotlight.

It's very real, and it's finally not the kind of cool story about mindless rebirth.