Many Children, Many Blessings, from a Hundred Wives and a Thousand Sons to an Eternal Immortal Dynasty

If you don't improve your cultivation level when you have more than a thousand points, the crisis will come immediately, and the author's IQ will be worrying.

Shouldn't the exercises be kept secret? Why are the leftovers scattered everywhere? No one covets it

I have finished reading it, but the ending is not good and ended hastily. But it still feels pretty good. Still cast a few votes.

After reading the entire book, I couldn't sleep at night and my blood pressure increased. This was caused by the aftereffects of excitement. It is the most logical and elegant of the systematic novels I have ever read. It would be even more perfect if the plot after the ascension is expanded and explored more deeply.

You are forcing the ending, why is it capped when you reach the Earth Immortal? If you are not satisfied with the ending, I will give you a so-so ending, bye bye.

Personally I think it's a pretty good book. I think the author's protagonist didn't make enemies everywhere during his development. He made friends with various other forces and powerful people in the book. I think this is normal. Many other types of books have the protagonist making enemies everywhere, making them look bad in the face, which makes them look ugly after reading too much. Then the author will write some interesting stories about the children of the protagonists, such as Ye Tianyong, Ye Zhengwen and his brother (forgot his name), and Ye Tianyu, etc. Finally, I hope the author will continue to write more stories about the protagonist's children. I believe your book will be popular!

Can the author improve the strength of the protagonist? After seeing Zhenwu, I feel that the gap between the protagonist and his family members is not big. He is not even the strongest. The skills and pills are all provided by the protagonist. The protagonist should be the core and have the strength to prevent backstabbing.

Reading this book makes me feel a little bit intellectual.

The storyline is well-organized. The storyline needs to be detailed and the plot needs to be slowed down a bit. The name of the big demon still needs to be worked out, but the name of the sect is okay.

The pace needs to be slowed down a bit, and the story needs to be a bit more detailed and more detailed. It goes too fast. So far, it's logical and organized. If I write it in more detail, it will be better.