He Married a Disfigured Girl for His Younger Brother, but He Didn't Expect Her to Be as Beautiful as a Fairy

Many novels are written too straightforwardly, or they are written in a chronicle-style way to make up the word count. This point is much better in Aunt Qiong Yao's collection of works. Only when authors read more good works can they create good works. I am just a reader who views what I feel and whoring is my purpose, Haihan!

At the beginning, too much description of the grudges between the three people was in the wrong place. The lack of clear character description of the male protagonist is often the biggest failure. Whether the article is well written or not, whether the character is established or not is very important. The charm of the male protagonist must be reflected. Whether a plate of good food is delicious or not can be known at a glance at the beginning. Zhang Wuji is sentimental, gentle and cowardly, and he is indecisive when it comes to feelings. Yang Guo is infatuated but has a resolute personality, and is stubborn but rational. Due to his unhappiness in his childhood, he was solitary, stubborn but generous, and had a clear sense of grudges and grudges against others. This was greatly influenced by Guo Jing. Speaking of Guo Jing's honesty and righteousness, his childhood in Mongolia and the influence of the Genghis Khan family are beyond many people in terms of tolerance. The characters of these people are very distinct and non-contradictory, and the characters are established.

Sometimes, don't write people as if they want to lick a dog. Being affectionate is not about licking, but about fulfilling. Therefore, the soul of an infatuated prodigal is often free and unrestrained.

Besides, if the Shen family women are vain people, their promised character will be nothing more than this, as the saying goes, birds of a feather flock together. It would be much better for the author to describe the villain as a foil to provoke each other's feelings (although it is cliché), but the character design and plot stand up.