Lu Yu traveled through the Great Xia Dynasty and became a little beggar competing with dogs for food.
Fortunately, he has the golden finger of [Illusive Space].
The imaginary space is filled with a group of figures from the martial arts world, including Chu Liuxiang, Li Xunhuan, Zhang Wuji, Hong Qigong, etc. As long as they complete the opportunity, they will receive the inheritance of various skills.
From the small flag officer of Jinyiwei, to the governor, to the commander, and then to the executive deputy emperor.
Lu Yu kills traitors and demons along the way, killing gods when gods stand in his way, and Buddha when he stands in the way of Buddha!
In the space of illusion.
Hong Qigong: You brat, you've taught me the Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms, and you're still not satisfied?
Li Xunhuan: It's indeed Xiao Lu's flying knife, with no false starts!
Xiao Longnu: Guo'er, is that you?
It's okay. The only fault is that Capt. Song is too smart. It's too awkward to use this kind of hypocrisy to highlight the protagonist's plan. The leader of the four captors at that time shouldn't look like an idiot even if the city is not deep.
If you don't write well and make it weird and weird, the score will drop to 2.5.
It's really verbose,,, it's a scheming, it's a bit fancy,, it's too peaceful.
I read Chapter 122 and it's a very bland plot with nothing attractive about it.
Withdrawn
I would like to recommend a book written by a friend, "Killing Wife, Proving the Dao of Jin Yiwei, I Kill Demons and Exterminating Demons in the World of High Martial Arts". You can search it on Qimao. If you are interested, you can check it out.
Cool article. This is a crushing cool article. The protagonist has an online IQ, is humorous, is neither arrogant nor impetuous, and feels like a pearl of wisdom. It is really good-looking. The protagonist is extremely powerful. The author is short and concise. It saves so much. Who can read it? [Tilting the head and laughing] [Tilting the head and crying]
I don't know how to evaluate it, it's so confusing
The plot is still a bit weak, the setting is pretty good, and the content is okay.
After chasing the whole process, overall I can give it seven out of ten points. Three points off for the ending being too hasty and the characterization.
The plot and characterization still fail to break away from Jin Gu's cage. Almost all characters can find their prototypes or similar plots in Jin Gu's novels. The author has obviously read a lot of novels, but what readers want to see is not just a reinterpretation of some familiar people and things, but more hope that the author can write something of his own.
The protagonist is the one who is almost at full level at the beginning. There is not much that is easy to describe in terms of combat power, so let's look at other aspects. Jin Yong's Xiao Feng starts at full level, but his worry has never been about who else can't beat him. Xiao Li Feidao started with the Law of Cause and Effect weapon, but his trouble was never to get to the top of the weapon spectrum. There is a huge room for growth for the protagonist of the leveling stream, which also gives the author room to fully portray the character and shape the world view.
In addition, the only way to promote the plot is to create conflicts. Authors with poor writing skills will forcibly reduce intelligence or trigger hostility between the protagonist and certain forces by describing powerful oppression. On the one hand, it promotes the development of the plot, and on the other hand, it also gives the protagonist an indispensable stepping stone on the road to growth. However, this operation is too simple on the one hand. Many authors describe a routine throughout the text, from the human world all the way to the heaven, just like the Saint Seiya, which is very boring after watching it for a long time.
The author can try to go back and read Jin Gu's novel a few times and carefully study how the master creates conflicts. Compared with simply reproducing familiar people and things, I think this will greatly improve the writing skills.
I also hope that the author can continue to grow and bring us more excellent works in the future!
It's gone, I've been chasing it for so long and it's gone [crying] [crying] [crying]
It's okay. The only fault is that Capt. Song is too smart. It's too awkward to use this kind of hypocrisy to highlight the protagonist's plan. The leader of the four captors at that time shouldn't look like an idiot even if the city is not deep.
If you don't write well and make it weird and weird, the score will drop to 2.5.
It's really verbose,,, it's a scheming, it's a bit fancy,, it's too peaceful.
I read Chapter 122 and it's a very bland plot with nothing attractive about it. Withdrawn
I would like to recommend a book written by a friend, "Killing Wife, Proving the Dao of Jin Yiwei, I Kill Demons and Exterminating Demons in the World of High Martial Arts". You can search it on Qimao. If you are interested, you can check it out.
Cool article. This is a crushing cool article. The protagonist has an online IQ, is humorous, is neither arrogant nor impetuous, and feels like a pearl of wisdom. It is really good-looking. The protagonist is extremely powerful. The author is short and concise. It saves so much. Who can read it? [Tilting the head and laughing] [Tilting the head and crying]
I don't know how to evaluate it, it's so confusing
The plot is still a bit weak, the setting is pretty good, and the content is okay.
After chasing the whole process, overall I can give it seven out of ten points. Three points off for the ending being too hasty and the characterization. The plot and characterization still fail to break away from Jin Gu's cage. Almost all characters can find their prototypes or similar plots in Jin Gu's novels. The author has obviously read a lot of novels, but what readers want to see is not just a reinterpretation of some familiar people and things, but more hope that the author can write something of his own. The protagonist is the one who is almost at full level at the beginning. There is not much that is easy to describe in terms of combat power, so let's look at other aspects. Jin Yong's Xiao Feng starts at full level, but his worry has never been about who else can't beat him. Xiao Li Feidao started with the Law of Cause and Effect weapon, but his trouble was never to get to the top of the weapon spectrum. There is a huge room for growth for the protagonist of the leveling stream, which also gives the author room to fully portray the character and shape the world view. In addition, the only way to promote the plot is to create conflicts. Authors with poor writing skills will forcibly reduce intelligence or trigger hostility between the protagonist and certain forces by describing powerful oppression. On the one hand, it promotes the development of the plot, and on the other hand, it also gives the protagonist an indispensable stepping stone on the road to growth. However, this operation is too simple on the one hand. Many authors describe a routine throughout the text, from the human world all the way to the heaven, just like the Saint Seiya, which is very boring after watching it for a long time. The author can try to go back and read Jin Gu's novel a few times and carefully study how the master creates conflicts. Compared with simply reproducing familiar people and things, I think this will greatly improve the writing skills. I also hope that the author can continue to grow and bring us more excellent works in the future!
It's gone, I've been chasing it for so long and it's gone [crying] [crying] [crying]