National Survival+Woodhouse Upgrade+Apocalyptic Natural Disaster+Farming Tower Defense+Strong Female
The end of the world has arrived, and tens of billions of residents around the world have entered another world and begun to survive.
Absolute zero, corrosive acid rain, drought and high temperatures, torrential floods, violent hurricanes... Disasters are frequent and the situation is precarious, but Qin Nong is not panicked at all.
There is only one thatched hut at the beginning? She awakens double copy skills in one second, plus plus plus plus!
The villain is jealous and comes to provoke?
Sorry, my shelter has been upgraded to a large villa, and I can switch to defense mode at will.
A big force came to invite Qin Nong to be a free thug?
Haha, first ask the tens of thousands of younger brothers in Qin Nong's shelter if they agree?
While others were still struggling to find survival supplies, Qin Nong had quietly become the number one in the region and turned on the lord mode.
Resources, I want;
Land, I want;
Leaders, I want it too!
Plant exotic plants, raise wild animals, make tools, and stockpile supplies.
In the desperate end of the world, only Qin Nong can break out of the siege and lead all mankind on a new bright road!
It doesn't look good, what a mess
The heroine is written in a stupid and over-the-top way
Who will follow her and who will die? It's always a matter of wisdom at various critical moments.
It feels like a cartoon, so it looks a lot inconsistent. For example, on the first day after entering the game, Internet celebrity Long Aotian PUAed the female fans who were sent to him at the same time, working for him and collecting supplies, which was too exaggerated. Then on the third day, Long Aotian defected to the Japanese Blood Alliance because he lost to the heroine. Not to mention that on the third day of the game, others were still struggling to make ends meet. The heroine only had skills as the number one in the region. Why did they have an alliance and just randomly come to be a skilled person. It's so outrageous
The author did not write on my mind
Did the author read Demon Slayer: Mugen Train?
The plot is good, even if you skip the word count part, it's still quite exciting. But author, the number of words in these chapters has really become more and more impressive recently. If you upgrade twice in one chapter, you have to write Qin Nong's parameters twice. Can't you just write about the changes? It's really too wordy! Can't the items in the treasure chest be directly written as items? It's really too much to have to repeat it 10 to 20 times using the system's broadcast method!
I want to see the kind of hide-and-seek dungeon with two camps: hunters and transformed players.
When I restored the memory of the previous world, I copied several disasters from the last time over again, which took up half a chapter. Author, are you afraid that we don't know that you have the copy-paste function?
Only personal opinion
Excellent:
①The subject matter is novel, it is the first time I have seen this subject matter on a female channel.
②It's more fun to have your own ideas.
③The plot is not confusing and the transition between the two nodes is good.
④ There is a moderate description of the clown, enriching the plot (that Long Aotian)
⑤ It writes about the power of women, which is more in line with the heroine, and also has the good quality of helping each other in the world.
Missing:
The people around me have some wisdom, such as their foresight towards Panpan's mother. It's just a cool article, it does require trade-offs, it's not a drawback.
Slot:
①The pseudo-boy Goblin should not be the male protagonist. . . Well, if it is, it is too superficial and common, the character's personality is not well positioned, and there is a sense of separation between personality and characteristics.
②Things with clear memory points such as the sun and the blood thorns can be seen in other Qianzhang articles, and imitations should have their own characteristics.
③The description of objects and environments in the article has a faint AI flavor, and the logic and correlation are not strong.
④The surrounding supporting characters are poorly described, and the relationship between the characters' emotions and the end of the world is briefly mentioned. Choose a few details that are related to the subsequent plot (intersection with the heroine)
The plot is good and the characters are wonderful, but the endless repetitive introduction of various prop data and character data really lowers the level of the novel! In terms of writing style, I really want to say that the author is verbose. Please, the author, please take care of these parameters. This is a good novel, and don't be lowered by this.
What I am saying is, can the author not copy those data and attribute contents? Every time there is a slight change, he copies the entire character data. The suspicion of low word count is obvious. Even though we don't know how to read it, it's annoying to flip through several pages!
It doesn't look good, what a mess The heroine is written in a stupid and over-the-top way Who will follow her and who will die? It's always a matter of wisdom at various critical moments.
It feels like a cartoon, so it looks a lot inconsistent. For example, on the first day after entering the game, Internet celebrity Long Aotian PUAed the female fans who were sent to him at the same time, working for him and collecting supplies, which was too exaggerated. Then on the third day, Long Aotian defected to the Japanese Blood Alliance because he lost to the heroine. Not to mention that on the third day of the game, others were still struggling to make ends meet. The heroine only had skills as the number one in the region. Why did they have an alliance and just randomly come to be a skilled person. It's so outrageous
The author did not write on my mind
Did the author read Demon Slayer: Mugen Train?
The plot is good, even if you skip the word count part, it's still quite exciting. But author, the number of words in these chapters has really become more and more impressive recently. If you upgrade twice in one chapter, you have to write Qin Nong's parameters twice. Can't you just write about the changes? It's really too wordy! Can't the items in the treasure chest be directly written as items? It's really too much to have to repeat it 10 to 20 times using the system's broadcast method!
I want to see the kind of hide-and-seek dungeon with two camps: hunters and transformed players.
When I restored the memory of the previous world, I copied several disasters from the last time over again, which took up half a chapter. Author, are you afraid that we don't know that you have the copy-paste function?
Only personal opinion Excellent: ①The subject matter is novel, it is the first time I have seen this subject matter on a female channel. ②It's more fun to have your own ideas. ③The plot is not confusing and the transition between the two nodes is good. ④ There is a moderate description of the clown, enriching the plot (that Long Aotian) ⑤ It writes about the power of women, which is more in line with the heroine, and also has the good quality of helping each other in the world. Missing: The people around me have some wisdom, such as their foresight towards Panpan's mother. It's just a cool article, it does require trade-offs, it's not a drawback. Slot: ①The pseudo-boy Goblin should not be the male protagonist. . . Well, if it is, it is too superficial and common, the character's personality is not well positioned, and there is a sense of separation between personality and characteristics. ②Things with clear memory points such as the sun and the blood thorns can be seen in other Qianzhang articles, and imitations should have their own characteristics. ③The description of objects and environments in the article has a faint AI flavor, and the logic and correlation are not strong. ④The surrounding supporting characters are poorly described, and the relationship between the characters' emotions and the end of the world is briefly mentioned. Choose a few details that are related to the subsequent plot (intersection with the heroine)
The plot is good and the characters are wonderful, but the endless repetitive introduction of various prop data and character data really lowers the level of the novel! In terms of writing style, I really want to say that the author is verbose. Please, the author, please take care of these parameters. This is a good novel, and don't be lowered by this.
What I am saying is, can the author not copy those data and attribute contents? Every time there is a slight change, he copies the entire character data. The suspicion of low word count is obvious. Even though we don't know how to read it, it's annoying to flip through several pages!