A Small Soldier at the Border Gate

Generally speaking, if the female protagonist's IQ is not online, don't force it. The male protagonist will act like the lower body of a woman has lowered her intelligence when he meets her.

Cleansing the Marrow with a Sword was written by you, the author. I updated it a long time ago, but I read it on a broken little software. Does the author still have the original manuscript? I know your book is too late, but I really want to continue reading it. It has always been a regret of mine. The protagonist's name is Xu Qingshan. I don't know if you have any reference for naming the protagonist in this book. I hope the author can reply to me after seeing it.

Take less women, it's become a stud novel, the male protagonist has too many women, it's okay in the early stage, but the more you read later, the more it looks like a novel

In fact, I haven't read much of this novel. I was a little interested in reading the title, but after reading the reviews and table of contents, I felt that it was very toxic, so I only read a little bit. My personal advice is just listen and don't take it seriously. First, be careful about the setting of the harem. If you don't know how to write, write less. In terms of love lines, what everyone likes to see is a male and female protagonist who is independent and intelligent, not a dog-licker. Dog-lickers are not popular. Readers would be bored by the fairy-type heroine protagonist who would rather refuse outright than play with ambiguity. Secondly, the settings should be consistent with the world view, and do not change the settings easily. Don't over-strengthen the protagonist, try to synchronize with the people around you to avoid the collapse of your strength and let yourself go. Comrade-in-arms companions are very important in military novels. Companions must be designed carefully and not be subdued. Everyone is the protagonist's support rather than a pendant. Otherwise, do not write group portrait novels such as military novels. The plot should be light and cheerful, and exciting if it should be tense. The purpose and setting of the plot must be determined, and try to avoid some taken-for-granted fun points to engage in intelligence-reducing plots.

Expressions of love in slave society are always full of that flavor

Fully support the masterpiece, let your "Da Gan Bian Guan Xiao Pawn" prosper all the way, big top!

Natural and simple! Comfortable! ! Those boring, cookie-cutter template novels! ! Use a game metaphor! ! There are thousands of boring Xianxia games! Far less down-to-earth than Yan Yun Liu!

Very well written! Don't worry about the nitpicking of individual readers!

The emperor is not allowed to give two pills

What's the difference between this and Border Warriors? Isn't it just a different name? The plot setting is exactly the same.