[System + mortals + farming + demon slaying + daily life]
Yun Fan, an outer disciple of Tianjian Sect, has been at the second level of Qi Refining for many years. In the words of his master:
"You might as well go home and plant sweet potatoes!"
[Ding, congratulations to the host for awakening to the farming system!
So why are you hesitating! Yun Fan resolutely resigned from the school and returned to his hometown.
"Ding! Congratulations to the host for getting the spiritual fire sweet potato, which can improve your cultivation, temper your spiritual roots, and nourish your fire nature."
"What do you mean your sweet potatoes are better than the Qi Nourishing Pill and can be grown in batches?"
"What does it mean that Tao fruit is also a fruit? You can grow it if you have land?"
"What do you mean your ginseng fruit made you a fairy?"
From the spiritual sweet potato to the ten-thousand-year Dao fruit... From then on, there was an Immortal Heavenly Lord in the world of immortality who just wanted to farm.
If you don't let me farm, then I will have to farm you.
The logic is clear, not mindless, nor is it treated specially when meeting a woman, it is relatively normal. The male protagonist is greedy for money but has a sense of right and wrong. He is forbearing and knows how to analyze. He is better than many so-called cool novels.
The whole plot of separating the male and female protagonists must be cliche but not cliché. . The female protagonist has a profound background and is then taken away. The male protagonist practices and becomes stronger to find him. . Can't we write a bland and ordinary female protagonist who accompanies the male protagonist in farming and development? . How nice
Generally speaking, after reading more than a hundred chapters, I feel that the plot is pretty good, and then the plot becomes a little more interesting later on. I won't go into details.
Those chapters about going back to Lingtian are really poisonous. . .
Unlike farming novels, the protagonist is a little bit both serious and independent.
The author's writing style is a bit immature.
And once all the female characters see the male protagonist showing off his power, no matter what age or level they are, they can no longer move. Whether it is a female cultivator who has lived for more than ten years in the Qi Refining stage or a female cultivator in her twenties or thirties during the Foundation building stage. Not to mention, as the leader of a sect at the peak of Tiandan stage, how old must he be in real life and in his heart.
Let's not mention for the moment that the actual age of each character in a book affects the correct judgment of mental age. Just talking about whether the female characters are successfully created or not is impressive. The female supporting character is too licky, and her appearance description is like a dog-skin plaster that cannot stick. After unlocking a new realm, the plot related to this person will not be discussed unless the map is triggered again, which is too inappropriate.
I write this review because I hope that the author will have the opportunity to read this. In the future, the creation of female characters can be more reasonable. In addition, the male protagonist can wake up and understand his own Taoist heart. What is his future attitude towards the female characters he "only knows"? Being able to cultivate the golden elixir (even the heavenly elixir) is definitely not the mentality of a teenager or twenty-year-old who is ignorant of the beginning of love. To love, you must dare to love and hate, let go and love. If love is not available, then most people will let it go. It is impossible for those who are indecisive to live to the level of Tiandan or above.
As for another point that needs to be mentioned, the male protagonist's teleportation talisman. Author, is the setting too outrageous? Is it possible to teleport from Fo Zhu Kingdom to Da Yin? Wouldn't it be so troublesome to go to war with another country in the first place? Wouldn't it be enough to just have someone carry thousands of fixed-point teleportation talismans and send them to thousands of Qi-training peaks? Also, is the difficulty of obtaining this talisman a little lower? The silver medals obtained by the level 1 Demon Suppressor can be exchanged, and the market and foundation storage storage space can also be used.
In addition, every event trigger is so coincidental. I happened to go to see a doctor for treatment, and the doctor's office happened to be at Dizi Climbing Tower.
I happened to go to join the inner sect of Qingyun Sect, and that day happened to be the annual day to recruit disciples.
Some coincidences can be added to the foreshadowing in the previous part, or through hearsay on the road to becoming popular, instead of just "happening" to happen upon arrival.
The last thing is the male protagonist's training speed. In ordinary fairy tales, it is normal for immortal cultivators to retreat for three to five years at a time. Even at a high level, spending more than ten or twenty years in retreat just to improve a certain magical power is too fast for the male protagonist. He has a small enclosed space that can be used more
Surrounded by a bunch of women, I can't write this without women, it's all about a bunch of women holding up the numbers.
The protagonist traveled to the fantasy world and brought Western weights and measures with him and spread them? This fantasy world is not that good either. What are weights and measures? They are tools of the ruling class, but they are easily replaced. Must praise!
There are people who practice immortality and believe in gods, which feels like a drama.
Why do some pretentious dogs always come to bother people? Can't we just kill him? It's really annoying to force the plot
The logic is clear, not mindless, nor is it treated specially when meeting a woman, it is relatively normal. The male protagonist is greedy for money but has a sense of right and wrong. He is forbearing and knows how to analyze. He is better than many so-called cool novels.
The whole plot of separating the male and female protagonists must be cliche but not cliché. . The female protagonist has a profound background and is then taken away. The male protagonist practices and becomes stronger to find him. . Can't we write a bland and ordinary female protagonist who accompanies the male protagonist in farming and development? . How nice
Generally speaking, after reading more than a hundred chapters, I feel that the plot is pretty good, and then the plot becomes a little more interesting later on. I won't go into details.
Those chapters about going back to Lingtian are really poisonous. . .
Unlike farming novels, the protagonist is a little bit both serious and independent.
The author's writing style is a bit immature. And once all the female characters see the male protagonist showing off his power, no matter what age or level they are, they can no longer move. Whether it is a female cultivator who has lived for more than ten years in the Qi Refining stage or a female cultivator in her twenties or thirties during the Foundation building stage. Not to mention, as the leader of a sect at the peak of Tiandan stage, how old must he be in real life and in his heart. Let's not mention for the moment that the actual age of each character in a book affects the correct judgment of mental age. Just talking about whether the female characters are successfully created or not is impressive. The female supporting character is too licky, and her appearance description is like a dog-skin plaster that cannot stick. After unlocking a new realm, the plot related to this person will not be discussed unless the map is triggered again, which is too inappropriate. I write this review because I hope that the author will have the opportunity to read this. In the future, the creation of female characters can be more reasonable. In addition, the male protagonist can wake up and understand his own Taoist heart. What is his future attitude towards the female characters he "only knows"? Being able to cultivate the golden elixir (even the heavenly elixir) is definitely not the mentality of a teenager or twenty-year-old who is ignorant of the beginning of love. To love, you must dare to love and hate, let go and love. If love is not available, then most people will let it go. It is impossible for those who are indecisive to live to the level of Tiandan or above. As for another point that needs to be mentioned, the male protagonist's teleportation talisman. Author, is the setting too outrageous? Is it possible to teleport from Fo Zhu Kingdom to Da Yin? Wouldn't it be so troublesome to go to war with another country in the first place? Wouldn't it be enough to just have someone carry thousands of fixed-point teleportation talismans and send them to thousands of Qi-training peaks? Also, is the difficulty of obtaining this talisman a little lower? The silver medals obtained by the level 1 Demon Suppressor can be exchanged, and the market and foundation storage storage space can also be used. In addition, every event trigger is so coincidental. I happened to go to see a doctor for treatment, and the doctor's office happened to be at Dizi Climbing Tower. I happened to go to join the inner sect of Qingyun Sect, and that day happened to be the annual day to recruit disciples. Some coincidences can be added to the foreshadowing in the previous part, or through hearsay on the road to becoming popular, instead of just "happening" to happen upon arrival. The last thing is the male protagonist's training speed. In ordinary fairy tales, it is normal for immortal cultivators to retreat for three to five years at a time. Even at a high level, spending more than ten or twenty years in retreat just to improve a certain magical power is too fast for the male protagonist. He has a small enclosed space that can be used more
Surrounded by a bunch of women, I can't write this without women, it's all about a bunch of women holding up the numbers.
The protagonist traveled to the fantasy world and brought Western weights and measures with him and spread them? This fantasy world is not that good either. What are weights and measures? They are tools of the ruling class, but they are easily replaced. Must praise!
There are people who practice immortality and believe in gods, which feels like a drama.
Why do some pretentious dogs always come to bother people? Can't we just kill him? It's really annoying to force the plot