Spiritual energy revived!
I was reincarnated as a frost plain snow wolf, awakened the talent of entry plunder, and became the only snow wolf king in this forest.
Powerful and lonely!
But.
The sudden appearance of a pair of abandoned babies made me no longer lonely. Instead, I gradually regained the humanity I had lost.
It's just that these two stupid daughters don't seem to have a good mind.
One always wants to fight with me, and the other always thinks I'm going to eat her...
No.
I, the Snow Wolf King! Can't you just be a daddy?
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I, the human empress, Su Qingxue!
In the past, they fought with the female demon king Luo Anfei, and finally died together, and they were all reincarnated into this new world where spiritual energy was revived.
Became a pair of twin sisters.
But who would have thought that he would be abandoned by his biological parents.
We thought we would only end up being eaten by the beasts in this life, but we didn't expect that a snow wolf king in the forest would actually adopt us? ?
I am used to seeing human beings with their schemes and their hearts full of evil.
But I felt unprecedented care from a wolf!
From now on.
He became my wolf daddy.
But Concubine Luo An is not very smart and always wants to fight with Father Wolf!
Luo Anfei: Why? This Demon Lord has cultivated to the realm of Heavenly Demon, why is he still not the opponent of Father Wolf?
…
I have read more than 270 chapters so far, and I feel that those two are very intelligent! They always say something about Father Wolf's murder, or the hints are very obvious, but they never believe it. If the author can write these two things more intelligently, maybe the rating of this book can be improved.
In the early stage, the author wrote without using his brain. They are all from Mu Shen Tian. The similarity is so high. He is evolving towards that angle step by step. He keeps saying no. When he sees a monster, he says that the Wolf King died there. When he sees one, he says he died there. He still believes that it is the change brought about by the butterfly effect. Is it funny? Did you two play any role in changing it in the past? It's still very incoherent. They come from the future, and if those monsters and the Wolf King are strong and have future growth, how can those "famous" monsters be alive? The future is alive. . How to get forest status? Why are the growth conditions of Crazy Blade, Hidden Blade, and Blood Blade the same? How can I get the same thing in the future without killing those monsters? Can the logic be clearer? I was convinced, and I became very angry after reading it. Every two chapters said that the Wolf King was going to die.
The two women talk too much nonsense, they are just trying to make up the word count.
After more than 400 chapters, it completely feels like someone else has written it, and even the name has changed.
A maximum of 2 points will be given out of ten.
And those two empresses were reincarnated as human girls picked up by the wolf father, not little wolf cubs.
I suggest you rewrite after chapter 400. Don't use AI to write for you. It was originally pretty good, but it ended up being completely ruined. I hope the author can change it after reading the comments. If not, I really can't stand it anymore.
As I said before, novels like this have all their flaws.
The Empress Demon Lord has no brains, especially when the protagonist in the front asks "Did Wolf Dad die here?" When something happens, especially when this kind of reborn character doesn't know anything except the "Spiritual Chronicles", and the author's writing is confusing, and the easy 18 turns into 16 in a short time. The following is basically a routine to exclaim that Wolf Dad is dead, and the last look is over.
It's okay if you want to watch it freshly, but if you have some brains or plan to pursue it for a long time, you can cancel it in advance.
You can update less, but you have to think too hard
The whole plot is full of dangers, no one can be invincible despite the system, and there are two empresses, which is very witty.
I like to overpower my combat power so much that I can't even understand cheating. Any level is high, haha.
I admit that your previous writing was very good, but you might as well stop writing later. I feel that even AI is better than yours.
I have read more than 270 chapters so far, and I feel that those two are very intelligent! They always say something about Father Wolf's murder, or the hints are very obvious, but they never believe it. If the author can write these two things more intelligently, maybe the rating of this book can be improved.
In the early stage, the author wrote without using his brain. They are all from Mu Shen Tian. The similarity is so high. He is evolving towards that angle step by step. He keeps saying no. When he sees a monster, he says that the Wolf King died there. When he sees one, he says he died there. He still believes that it is the change brought about by the butterfly effect. Is it funny? Did you two play any role in changing it in the past? It's still very incoherent. They come from the future, and if those monsters and the Wolf King are strong and have future growth, how can those "famous" monsters be alive? The future is alive. . How to get forest status? Why are the growth conditions of Crazy Blade, Hidden Blade, and Blood Blade the same? How can I get the same thing in the future without killing those monsters? Can the logic be clearer? I was convinced, and I became very angry after reading it. Every two chapters said that the Wolf King was going to die.
The two women talk too much nonsense, they are just trying to make up the word count. After more than 400 chapters, it completely feels like someone else has written it, and even the name has changed. A maximum of 2 points will be given out of ten.
And those two empresses were reincarnated as human girls picked up by the wolf father, not little wolf cubs.
I suggest you rewrite after chapter 400. Don't use AI to write for you. It was originally pretty good, but it ended up being completely ruined. I hope the author can change it after reading the comments. If not, I really can't stand it anymore.
As I said before, novels like this have all their flaws. The Empress Demon Lord has no brains, especially when the protagonist in the front asks "Did Wolf Dad die here?" When something happens, especially when this kind of reborn character doesn't know anything except the "Spiritual Chronicles", and the author's writing is confusing, and the easy 18 turns into 16 in a short time. The following is basically a routine to exclaim that Wolf Dad is dead, and the last look is over. It's okay if you want to watch it freshly, but if you have some brains or plan to pursue it for a long time, you can cancel it in advance.
You can update less, but you have to think too hard
The whole plot is full of dangers, no one can be invincible despite the system, and there are two empresses, which is very witty.
I like to overpower my combat power so much that I can't even understand cheating. Any level is high, haha.
I admit that your previous writing was very good, but you might as well stop writing later. I feel that even AI is better than yours.