The Great Qian Butcher

It's a pity that the data of the work is too poor and I can't persist. I have no choice but to end it early. If you like this book and read it to the end, I can only say I'm sorry.

It's still good, with a strong sense of life and vivid descriptions.

Can it be faster? Writing is too slow! Difficult to follow up

It's bland. Maybe the author wants to write about the difficulties of ordinary people's lives in the city. Blandness is the real thing. But the life of reading is bland enough. Do you want to experience the blandness in your novel?

I would like to give the author a suggestion, either don't write a system wall article. If it is a wall article, please feel free. Who wants to read a system article that has no effect?

Everything is fine up front, step by step. As a result, in Chapter 30, there was a sudden Liyuan poetry meeting, and he had to rely on him to compose poems, which was too far-fetched.

The marriage was broken off and turned into an exchange of marriages. I signed it without seeing anyone. He is handsome, has a high income, has a system, and can be brainless.

This chapter is two chapters ahead of others, and the author updated it quickly. Although it was a bit weak in the early stage, it finally became frightened.

It looks good, I wish I could write it longer

The background of this book is adapted from the situation of the Southern Song Dynasty and the Jin Dynasty. It can be regarded as an imaginary history. If you are a reader, you can read it patiently. If there are any bad points, you are welcome to correct me.