Star Mage of Another World

It seems that the author is a Shao Min writer, so his Mandarin is okay, but he can't recognize all the characters, so there are many typos, most of which are homophones.

Visiting the masterpiece, the subject matter is very novel and the writing is good. Come on, work hard and wish it a great success! Become a god soon! Decisively collect and follow! -

After reading these chapters, I feel that they are a bit verbose, and there are many typos in each chapter, which affects reading.

Reading the protagonist's name will persuade some people. Author, have you ever seen the protagonist called by his name or something similar? A successful good book is never supported by the name of the protagonist. Focus on the writing and logic.

"Li Sheng" comes to visit the treasured land of the great god! Please give me sixty chapters to give you all your expectations for fantasy! [A piece of demonic red maple leaf, a sickly young man, washed away by grievances and resentments, washes away the beauty of the world like a dream, washes away the helplessness and shallowness of life, and finally becomes a saint!

I am also convinced by this writing style. Count how many times you have read this chapter, it is simply...