Ocean Survival: Obtain Mysterious Talents at the Beginning

Talent is the same as having no talent at all. He is obviously a god-level talent with strong luck, but as a result, more than 70 people can do what he can do at the same time. It does not show that he is better than others at all. Then I picked up a cat, and suddenly my love overflowed. I fed the cat doomsday materials like raft survival and even high-end materials that can add attributes, and had various awkward conversations and interactions with the cat. It seemed like I was just talking about water. Later, he changed jobs to an extremely mediocre job, and the experience required for upgrading was doubled... He didn't look like a cool male protagonist at all...

The content is in Chapters 10 to 14 and 17 to 19 - the following is my review, focusing on "Use another life to gain achievements, gain supplies, and make people act ou. Suddenly a cat appears. Focus on describing interactions and breaking away from the plot. This is still to gain achievements, suddenly your own emotions, or to make people ou." Do you also deserve the achievement of being a kind person? Isn't it just to get a reward for yourself? She is only a first-class ship. You are a second-class ship and then you also upgraded the propeller. You went to the island at the same time. Why did she go there for so long? She was half-dead before you went up. I didn't know that for such a kickback, you actually decomposed her ship for 100 wood and 50 iron nails. That's right. Just give yourself a large amount of materials that have not been discounted, hahaha, deliberately use one life to pave the way for yourself to upgrade the ship, and then get the news, you will go to the island to refresh the monsters without telling you, use a few chapters to write about the sudden appearance of the cat, and while the activity is still going on, how many results did you write before ending the ongoing fishing activity? Gee, you are so generous. You used all the fish to please a cat and got an achievement. You deserve such a low score.

Take a look at my critical review The content is in Chapters 10 to 14 and Chapters 17 to 19 - The following is my review, the focus is "Using another life to gain achievements and supplies is disgusting. Suddenly a cat appears. Focus on describing interactions and breaking away from the plot. This is still to gain achievements. Suddenly one's own emotions are still disgusting." Do you also deserve the achievement of being a kind person? Isn't it just to get a reward for yourself? She is only a first-class ship. You are a second-class ship and then you also upgraded the propeller. You went to the island at the same time. Why did she go there for so long? She was half-dead before you went up. I didn't know that for such a kickback, you actually decomposed her ship for 100 wood and 50 iron nails. That's right. Just give yourself a large amount of materials that have not been discounted, hahaha, deliberately use one life to pave the way for yourself to upgrade the ship, and then get the news, you will go to the island to refresh the monsters without telling you, use a few chapters to write about the sudden appearance of the cat, and while the activity is still going on, how many results did you write before ending the ongoing fishing activity? You are so generous. You used all the fish to catch the cat and got an achievement. Do you deserve it? Do you deserve it? You deserve such a low score

I'm so disgusted, I'm shaking my head,—"Let me give a critical review"——"The symbol is to allow more people to see the comments . . . Are you worthy of the achievement of being a kind person? Isn't it just to get a reward for yourself? She is only a first-class ship. You are a second-class ship and then you also upgraded the propeller. You went to the island at the same time. Why did she go there for so long? She was half-dead before you went up. I didn't know that for such a kickback, you actually decomposed her ship for 100 wood and 50 iron nails. That's right. Just give yourself a large amount of materials that have not been discounted, hahaha, deliberately use one life to pave the way for yourself to upgrade the ship, and then get the news, you will go to the island to refresh the monsters without telling you, use a few chapters to write about the sudden appearance of the cat, and while the activity is still going on, how many results did you write before ending the ongoing fishing activity? You are so generous. You used all the fish to catch the cat and got an achievement. Do you deserve it? Are you worthy? Deserve that low f

I'm so disgusted, I'm shaking my head,—"Let me give a critical review"——"The symbol is to allow more people to see the comments . . . Are you worthy of the achievement of being a kind person? Isn't it just to get a reward for yourself? She is only a first-class ship. You are a second-class ship and then you also upgraded the propeller. You went to the island at the same time. Why did she go there for so long? She was half-dead before you went up. I didn't know that for such a kickback, you actually decomposed her ship for 100 wood and 50 iron nails. That's right. Just give yourself a large amount of materials that have not been discounted, hahaha, deliberately use one life to pave the way for yourself to upgrade the ship, and then get the news, you will go to the island to refresh the monsters without telling you, use a few chapters to write about the sudden appearance of the cat, and while the activity is still going on, how many results did you write before ending the ongoing fishing activity? You are so generous. You used all the fish to catch the cat and got an achievement. Do you deserve it? Are you worthy? You deserve such a low score

I'm so disgusted, I'm shaking my head,—"Let me give a critical review"——"The symbol is to allow more people to see the comments . . . Are you worthy of the achievement of being a kind person? Isn't it just to get a reward for yourself? She is only a first-class ship. You are a second-class ship and then you also upgraded the propeller. You went to the island at the same time. Why did she go there for so long? She was half-dead before you went up. I didn't know that for such a kickback, you actually decomposed her ship for 100 wood and 50 iron nails. That's right. Just give yourself a large amount of materials that have not been discounted, hahaha, deliberately use one life to pave the way for yourself to upgrade the ship, and then get the news, you will go to the island to refresh the monsters without telling you, use a few chapters to write about the sudden appearance of the cat, and while the activity is still going on, how many results did you write before ending the ongoing fishing activity? You are so generous. You used all the fish to catch the cat and got an achievement. Do you deserve it? Are you worthy? You deserve such a low score, but you are the only one who is so kind. It's really disgusting.

The descriptions in many places are unclear and the word order is logically contradictory.

Why does it still feel like there are so many typos?

Chapters 12 and 13 were so embarrassing to me. I know what the author wants to express, but if you don't know how to write it, don't write it. You can't write that kind of feeling, so it's just embarrassing. The most taboo thing about a cool novel is to suddenly fall into literary youth syndrome. This kind of plot requires good writing skills, which obviously you don't have, so just write a cool novel honestly, okay?

I don't know how to say something good