Please Xian'er

The beginning is eye-catching, but there is too much foreshadowing and no explanation at the end. There are too many typos.

There are just too many typos! The plot and everything are great.

I started writing randomly from the middle. There are a lot of holes left unfinished and the plot is a mess.

It doesn't look good at all. What a garbage ending. There are a lot of typos in it.

Super beautiful, the protagonist's love makes me envious

The male protagonist is very strong as the Underworld Envoy, and the female protagonist is also very strong in the end. And at the end, there is a section about Qinglian and Pluto that is really touching (Qinglian and Pluto are not male and female protagonists). The more I read, the more I want to read it. The more I read, the more I want to see if the author can publish another similar book.

I don't know why, but I really like Xu Yunian