The Four Treasures Are Coming, Zhan Ye's Beloved Wife Is the Boss

The author's writing style is quite good, but I just don't understand why there is a parallel time and space at the end. What does this have to do with the previous plot or character relationship?

The plot of this parallel space is very social

The plot is exciting, the sentences are fluent, and the writing is brilliant!

The subsequent melodrama is off topic, I entered a dream and couldn't get out, it has a beginning but no end.

Nice! The plot is exciting and the writing is brilliant. It's just that the update is too slow, which seems like the author is a little bit off-putting to readers.

Updates are too slow, the author needs to work harder

It looks good, but updates are slow. It would be nice if they could be faster.

The further you go, the more it gets a bit messy, with too many characters appearing. It's quite exciting.

The storyline is vivid! Intriguing

It's just that the updates are too slow! Anxious