I Just Want to Live

The subject matter is good, but the end is unfinished. The operation of forcing writing to collapse is very confusing. If you write a long article with tens of millions of words, it is not a big problem. Just after the land reclamation period ends, it will immediately enter the stage of increasing combat power, mutation and evolution, and the explosion of hot weapons, and it will suddenly come to an abrupt end. Obviously, the second stage mutation has been written. If there are no zombies, can't we write mutant creatures? Mutated plants can also be written casually. Railway transportation that relies on internal combustion engines. Not to mention high-end, gliders can always be written. Not to mention how many tons of bombs are required to destroy a city. There is no bomb system like World War II. It is not a precision-guided bomb. A little farther away, reinforced concrete will only break a few skins. It is outrageous that the corpses bring flash bombs to guide the bombers. Even if you use lighting rescue bombs, at least they will last longer.

In Le Se Shu, the characters are all mentally ill, their reactions are slow, the plot is draggy, and there is no sense of tension at all.

Against all odds, are you used to covering your mouth?

Five people were arrested by three?

I said you only know how to lick him!

You just lick him

It's really poisonous. The protagonist group is a bunch of idiots, and so is the protagonist.

It's beautiful, but it's so cruel that I can't stand it anymore.

The views on the origin of species evolution and loss mentioned by the author in the article are very interesting.