【System】【Multiple female leads】【Light power fantasy】【Comedy】【If this isn’t good, I’ll do what everyone else does and cut my own balls off】
A charming young beauty seduces her master and defies convention; silver hair meets rosy cheeks.
A night together in the Dragon and Phoenix Pavilion, two bodies as one; a pear tree in bloom bends over a crabapple.
Yang Huan spent a thousand years as a lovesick doormat. He thought his story was over, but the real plot had only just begun.
His childhood sweetheart of a wife was still in her prime, his reserved master still had her charms, and his succubus disciple was temptation incarnate… while he alone was old and frail, with death close at hand.
【The Host has successfully played the lovesick doormat for a thousand years. Fenglingyueying activated!】
When the sect was on the verge of destruction, Yang Huan stepped forward.
“This old man is Yang Huan! I ask the Great Emperor to meet his death…”
It seems that there is no normal person in the book, they are all wise. The mind of an immortal who has cultivated for thousands of years is not as good as that of an ordinary person. What a waste of cultivation. The realm is also messy. There are people in the protagonist's sect who have ascended, but their strength is still so weak. It is outrageous. A random small sect can almost destroy the sect. Is this a normal phenomenon? It's outrageous that that small sect was casually wiped out.
The first half is good to watch and well written. When the sect is in trouble, it changes its flavor. It's like writing a vernacular story about a difficulty. Gu Li, Shi San, Nan Feng, etc. Are all peerless masters. Since they are being hunted down by some spies and minions, and they all seem to have no cultivation power, the kung fu cultivation mentioned in the first part is just like ordinary people in the second part. Alas, if you don't want to read it, decisively unfollow.
The main line of the story is unclear. After reading it for a long time, it was all nonsense and I had no idea what the author wanted to say.
I really can't stand this book. The preface doesn't match the subtitles and the plot is a mess.
It's over and I can't stand it anymore. Shi Hao, who trained thousands of disciples from the sect to create a perfect world, is sidelined. The author, you have been exposed as a stitching monster with AI writing. It's boring, embarrassing, and distracting.
The more I wrote, the worse it got, and after more than 120 chapters I couldn't stand it anymore. The front is fine
The later chapters feel particularly confusing. . . . Moreover, half of the time, everything is being modified later and I can't see it anymore.
In the later stage, I wrote it purely randomly, especially the part about Yu Wei leaving seclusion is the same as what AI wrote.
No matter how high the evaluation is, it is still half of a work that has been left unfinished for more than 200 chapters as "this chapter is under revision". It is a pity that a work has been completely destroyed in this unfinished business.
How can I put it... It's a waste. There is writing but it is used in the wrong place. When I read this book, I felt that it was clearly a fun subject, but I felt uncomfortable watching it. The protagonist was grinding and upgrading. He had no realm, but he had some brains. His brain was not only pretending to be deep, resourceful, and scheming, but there was no description of the success of the plot. He just frowned and made a decision that everyone could make. This subject matter can be read no matter how it is written. This writing is really hard to read. I can't watch it. I really don't recommend it.
It seems that there is no normal person in the book, they are all wise. The mind of an immortal who has cultivated for thousands of years is not as good as that of an ordinary person. What a waste of cultivation. The realm is also messy. There are people in the protagonist's sect who have ascended, but their strength is still so weak. It is outrageous. A random small sect can almost destroy the sect. Is this a normal phenomenon? It's outrageous that that small sect was casually wiped out.
The first half is good to watch and well written. When the sect is in trouble, it changes its flavor. It's like writing a vernacular story about a difficulty. Gu Li, Shi San, Nan Feng, etc. Are all peerless masters. Since they are being hunted down by some spies and minions, and they all seem to have no cultivation power, the kung fu cultivation mentioned in the first part is just like ordinary people in the second part. Alas, if you don't want to read it, decisively unfollow.
The main line of the story is unclear. After reading it for a long time, it was all nonsense and I had no idea what the author wanted to say.
I really can't stand this book. The preface doesn't match the subtitles and the plot is a mess.
It's over and I can't stand it anymore. Shi Hao, who trained thousands of disciples from the sect to create a perfect world, is sidelined. The author, you have been exposed as a stitching monster with AI writing. It's boring, embarrassing, and distracting.
The more I wrote, the worse it got, and after more than 120 chapters I couldn't stand it anymore. The front is fine
The later chapters feel particularly confusing. . . . Moreover, half of the time, everything is being modified later and I can't see it anymore.
In the later stage, I wrote it purely randomly, especially the part about Yu Wei leaving seclusion is the same as what AI wrote.
No matter how high the evaluation is, it is still half of a work that has been left unfinished for more than 200 chapters as "this chapter is under revision". It is a pity that a work has been completely destroyed in this unfinished business.
How can I put it... It's a waste. There is writing but it is used in the wrong place. When I read this book, I felt that it was clearly a fun subject, but I felt uncomfortable watching it. The protagonist was grinding and upgrading. He had no realm, but he had some brains. His brain was not only pretending to be deep, resourceful, and scheming, but there was no description of the success of the plot. He just frowned and made a decision that everyone could make. This subject matter can be read no matter how it is written. This writing is really hard to read. I can't watch it. I really don't recommend it.