My Fiancée Overheard My Thoughts. Now It's Too Late to Regret Breaking Up

What a pity, really such a pity. The content is very interesting, and the story logic is also good. The only shortcoming is that it is too ruthless. It is acceptable for the ex-fiancée to be ruthless, but the ruthlessness of the other two girls is a bit unjustifiable. But the plot is still very powerful, it is indeed a good book

It took me a few hours to finish reading this short book about rebirth. Briefly express your opinion. From the interaction between the male protagonist and various supporting female characters, it can be seen that the author is trying to develop some articles through "voices". From the first fifty chapters, we can see some of the author's thoughts and the worldview he wants to lay out. However, by the middle of the article, it was obvious that the author's writing had changed, resulting in an incomplete worldview and a hasty ending. Regarding the mid-term issue, my opinion is that the author has not sorted out the overall structure of the book. It can be said that there is no outline or even a draft to help him clarify his creative ideas. The most obvious point is that the author wants to add a lot of classic urban literary elements to set off the male protagonist's abilities; for example, the mysterious family behind the male protagonist, the mysterious dream of the sister-in-law, the sudden addition of the concept of a master, and several characters with special attributes (gangsters, idols, directors, martial arts, etc.). If used appropriately, these elements can completely enrich the world view of this book. But the author completely lost his purpose at this time, and developed all the above elements in just 30 chapters. After that, the author did not lay out the origin and development of these elements at all, and only briefly touched on these elements that should have enriched the work. It can even be concluded that the author thought of these elements and directly added them to the article. Then an unstable and even chaotic male protagonist was created. Excessive and superficial elements create a worldview full of holes. In the end, the author can only mechanically provide the last supporting actress to show readers his original concept of "voice". Faced with this worldview that is already riddled with holes, and the male protagonist who is completely inadequate, the author has only one inevitable path left...

What do you mean, you are from a wealthy family and you know how to invest as soon as you get a small goal. Or speculative investment. It's a proper act of being a loser.

It's really not good to read, it's too boring, I wrote several chapters on some unimportant content, no wonder it's unfinished

Any plot related to Lin Yaoyao is very boring

I have one thing to say, except for the bad ending, the rebirth regret story is considered to be of the highest quality. If you are reincarnated, you can pretend that all the past events have never happened. If you don't see the woman crying, you will feel soft. It is quite enjoyable to watch, but the scene of hunting the tiger in the zoo is a bit lame. The ending is probably because there is no time or refinement. If it develops normally, there should be two female supporting roles, the aunt's role, and the return to Beijing scene, but it is unfinished.

Personally, I think it was pretty good, but it ended too suddenly.

Funny? It was really well written, but it disappeared directly later. Don't tell me that I picked it up from another website.

The plot is a bit draggy. I talk a lot of nonsense while talking about the real thing (plot). For example, when I first meet someone, I will show water, hibiscus, lotus and glutinous tea juice, and have a good temperament. When someone comes up, I will just put a bunch of keywords into it without telling the plot, and I will deliberately hang you up. The chapters are not long.

The characters' ideas are relatively clear without jumping around, especially the ex-wife's regrets which stem from her desire to gain her voice but was ruthlessly suppressed. But other writing styles and plots are generally more routine.