Cultivation of Immortality

It's thousands of miles away at every turn. I feel like this author not only has no common sense, but also has a messed up concept of numbers.

In ancient times, there was no such title as a city. It's a bit of common sense.

There are either omissions or typos, or inappropriate wording. There are not many authors with a solid foundation in online novels nowadays.

"More than ninety years old", does it read more smoothly with "more than ninety years old"? There are many similar ones, which are extremely awkward to read!

After reading the first thirty chapters, I thought it was okay.

Very nice book. Come on, be unique.