No. 1 Feng Shui Master

The writing is very good, the first 50% is a masterpiece, but then it gradually goes off topic, the holes dug are not filled, and the length of the short story is not controlled. In the end it almost sucked. Pity

, The thinking and content are still very good, but I always use the first person, which doesn't sound like a novel, as if I am writing my own memoirs. I hope the author can change the first person, so that the effect will be better.