After Letting Go of the School Beauty, I Chose the Super Cute Little Qingmei

The article is well written, but there are too many typos. Did the author record it in the dialect of his hometown?

The writing is actually pretty good, there are some typos in some places, but why didn't the author write a hasty ending?

This book is good to read, but too little

Overall, the ending was too hasty, and the girl who had to confess her love to the male protagonist before he was reincarnated ended up going in. The story between the heroine and the hero goes as smoothly as a dream. Some typos still need to be corrected, and the male protagonist's name appears in two ways. In terms of plot, the character design is not very good. The character of the girl who confesses her love is not good enough. She only looks crazy but not crazy. The character design of the male protagonist and the female protagonist are still satisfactory. Compared with similar articles, there are fewer scenes of the female protagonist, and there are more plots from the beginning to the end on the male protagonist's journey to start a business. The ending story spans a wide range of time and scope. Starting a business accounts for half of the finale, and the engagement, marriage, pregnancy, and natural childbirth are all covered in one go. It feels a bit like putting the cart before the horse.