The First King of Soldiers

The description of details is okay, but some places are a bit cumbersome and deserve improvement. Keep it up! Write better and more thought-provoking books!

Very beautiful and imaginative

The characters are vivid, full of justice, and the plot has ups and downs!

I didn't pay much attention to it at first, just to kill time. When I saw the 1870 photos showing my identity, I felt very excited and I remembered a lot of my past.

It's pretty good to write, but it's a bit irritating and it rained too much.

The front part is okay, but the back part is too wordy and I don't want to read it.

There are two things I like about this book. Firstly, it is a book about two people for a lifetime. Secondly, the emotional line of this book is very well written. It can be seen that the protagonist himself attaches great importance to emotions and controls people's hearts very well. The ending is also perfect... But about the woman Lin Yunnan, the author's writing is a bit hook... This woman does not make people feel very good and is a bit nauseating. As a result, the author also wrote that the protagonist likes her and likes her bad words? Or do you like her bullying the heroine? Although there is a misunderstanding, it is wrong to insult and bully people without asking anything. Another point is that the author has a little bit of a word count in some places... Generally speaking, it is okay.

For justice and protection in dreams

It's pretty! Climax after another