[Single heroine + online dating + campus beauty + two-way love + non-rebirth love + easy daily life + dog food]
In the game, my good and fun-loving friend saw that I was an idiot in love and insisted on volunteering to be my love adviser and give me guidance on love.
After accepting the guidance of a military advisor, the road to love can be said to be like walking on thin ice, with repeated defeats.
Just when I decided to go to college and no longer believed in the advice of this dog-headed military advisor, I unexpectedly met the school beauty I liked.
However, she seems a little too enthusiastic about me? ! What's going on.
At the same time, the military advisor also sent me a message.
"Do you like it? Do you want to pursue it?"
"As long as I'm here, success is guaranteed."
…
The day I successfully confessed my love to the school beauty.
The senior sister suddenly leaned into my ear and said, "Military advisor, I will do what I say, and I guarantee that you will catch up."
The overall writing is okay, but what about the second half for a big guy like me? ? ? The relationship was established not long ago, but the male protagonist had a successful career and got married to the female protagonist, and then it ended. Of course, everything else was okay. Aside from the plot, it was generally quite satisfactory.
Not bad, not bad (｀･ω･´)ゞSaluteっ
So-so, there are too many jokes, many of the words of the senior sister feel awkward, and the serious affairs of the two people who are in love are not written seriously. They are all interspersed with other events, which is not good to watch.
Well, to be honest, it's a bit unfinished. The first part is okay, and the middle part is sweet. There are a lot of holes left unfilled at the end, and suddenly the ending is too hasty. In fact, I could have written hundreds of thousands more words →_→
The dialogue was very confusing, with mental thoughts and conversations all jumbled up. And the plot is so boring
Lao Deng, stop showing off your affection and publish a new book soon. I also want to ask, does the new book have an autobiographical plot or is it based on reality? I highly recommend this, it will have a different effect.
Are you serious about not being the author? Damn it, the author actually has a sweet love. New book
However, the later part about starting a business is actually very awkward and unrealistic. I understand that the author wanted to write about a young and promising protagonist, but well, the writing was too fake and it made me uncomfortable to watch [sweat]
This idea is really good. The highlight of many romance novels is that the male and female protagonists test each other and understand each other's intentions, but misunderstandings occur due to communication with other people and other reasons. But this one is different. Generally speaking, if you encounter any situation, you can just ask the military advisor and you can directly understand it.
All surnamed Su? Lovers eventually become brothers and sisters [dog head]
The overall writing is okay, but what about the second half for a big guy like me? ? ? The relationship was established not long ago, but the male protagonist had a successful career and got married to the female protagonist, and then it ended. Of course, everything else was okay. Aside from the plot, it was generally quite satisfactory.
Not bad, not bad (｀･ω･´)ゞSaluteっ
So-so, there are too many jokes, many of the words of the senior sister feel awkward, and the serious affairs of the two people who are in love are not written seriously. They are all interspersed with other events, which is not good to watch.
Well, to be honest, it's a bit unfinished. The first part is okay, and the middle part is sweet. There are a lot of holes left unfilled at the end, and suddenly the ending is too hasty. In fact, I could have written hundreds of thousands more words →_→
The dialogue was very confusing, with mental thoughts and conversations all jumbled up. And the plot is so boring
Lao Deng, stop showing off your affection and publish a new book soon. I also want to ask, does the new book have an autobiographical plot or is it based on reality? I highly recommend this, it will have a different effect.
Are you serious about not being the author? Damn it, the author actually has a sweet love. New book
However, the later part about starting a business is actually very awkward and unrealistic. I understand that the author wanted to write about a young and promising protagonist, but well, the writing was too fake and it made me uncomfortable to watch [sweat]
This idea is really good. The highlight of many romance novels is that the male and female protagonists test each other and understand each other's intentions, but misunderstandings occur due to communication with other people and other reasons. But this one is different. Generally speaking, if you encounter any situation, you can just ask the military advisor and you can directly understand it.
All surnamed Su? Lovers eventually become brothers and sisters [dog head]