The Campus Beauty Senior Is My Strategist, and My Target Is Her

The overall writing is okay, but what about the second half for a big guy like me??? The relationship was established not long ago, but the male protagonist had a successful career and got married to the female protagonist, and then it ended. Of course, everything else was okay. Aside from the plot, it was generally quite satisfactory.

Not bad, not bad (`･ω･´)ゞSaluteっ

So-so, there are too many jokes, many of the words of the senior sister feel awkward, and the serious affairs of the two people who are in love are not written seriously. They are all interspersed with other events, which is not good to watch.

Well, to be honest, it's a bit unfinished. The first part is okay, and the middle part is sweet. There are a lot of holes left unfilled at the end, and suddenly the ending is too hasty. In fact, I could have written hundreds of thousands more words →_→

The dialogue was very confusing, with mental thoughts and conversations all jumbled up. And the plot is so boring

Lao Deng, stop showing off your affection and publish a new book soon. I also want to ask, does the new book have an autobiographical plot or is it based on reality? I highly recommend this, it will have a different effect.

Are you serious about not being the author? Damn it, the author actually has a sweet love. New book

However, the later part about starting a business is actually very awkward and unrealistic. I understand that the author wanted to write about a young and promising protagonist, but well, the writing was too fake and it made me uncomfortable to watch [sweat]

This idea is really good. The highlight of many romance novels is that the male and female protagonists test each other and understand each other's intentions, but misunderstandings occur due to communication with other people and other reasons. But this one is different. Generally speaking, if you encounter any situation, you can just ask the military advisor and you can directly understand it.

All surnamed Su? Lovers eventually become brothers and sisters 🐶