Reborn, I Refuse to Be This Sect's Saint Son

Exchange visits!!! I came to visit with my works "Four Universes in the Sky", "Xia Feng Zhan Ying" and "The Chaos of the World". The sword has been passed down through the ages with the industry, and the sword can split the world in troubled times. The spear moves vertically and horizontally like a dot of ink, and the stick sweeps down the demons in all directions. The steel whip that subdues demons shakes the five mountains, and the halberd is opened in two months and thousands of enemies are attacked. The ax sweeps the world like a whirlwind, and the hook cuts off all impermanent karma and eliminates it. The ax shook the eight directions and leveled the nine continents, hammering the sky and thundering on the earth. From now on, no one is lucky enough in the world, and warriors from all over the world have entered the world. My writing skills are a bit weak, and there are still many shortcomings. I hope that all the masters will come to guide, visit and help each other, and give you advice. I am very grateful...

The pace is a bit slow and each chapter is too short. In addition, there are too many verbose places, such as leaving the sect, leaving the Xiao family, repeating it over and over again

This novel is too watery. I repeatedly emphasize that I shouldn't add a dog to my family.

Yoxi#After rebirth, I will no longer be the holy son of this sect#

I hope it will be updated soon, it's really exciting

1 Q@e. Ox :9am eRk:/ 1 q@e. Ox :9am eRk:/

It looks great, it looks great, and the content is so exciting. Come and check it out. (I can't be disgusted by myself, I have to trick people into coming in and then kill them)

My personal opinion: As a person who has lived for thousands of years and came back to life again, Pig's Foot is too naive in terms of intelligence, experience and emotions. The basic content of the article feels very superficial, unnecessary psychological description of Pig's Foot is forced, and irrelevant behaviors are forced together. The idea is good. Pig's feet can obviously be the mastermind behind everything. But he always seems to be the one who stands out. If he hadn't been a pig's trotter, I don't think he would have survived more than one episode in other people's stories.

While saying that he was no longer soft-hearted, he went to rescue him again. Does this weird setting have to be disgusting?

Fully support the masterpiece, let your "After Rebirth, I Will Not Become the Holy Son of this Sect" prosper all the way, a big hit!