[Traditional fantasy], [No system], [Decisive killing], [Single female protagonist], [Invincible flow], [Push all the way]
With the sky-burial knife in hand, you can bury all living beings in the sky and on the earth.
Wang Kang, the master of martial arts, was reborn in the wild world. As soon as he showed his talents, he was forced into marriage and married into an extravagance. So he entered the Tao through martial arts, broke the situation by killing, rebelled against the powerful clan, fought against the eight wilderness, defeated the genius, and dominated the world.
There is a chess game between immortals and demons on the other side of the road, with the way of heaven as the chess game and billions of living beings as chess pieces. Wang Kang goes against the will of heaven and rushes to the other side, cutting over the chessboard with one sword, annihilating all the gods, using the immortals as his servants and the demons as his slaves, suppressing them for eternity.
Almost everyone I meet calls the protagonist Yasuko. Author, don't you think this title is a bit awkward? It's okay for men to call me this. In the book, the women who meet for the first time all call the protagonist this way. It feels like you are writing from the perspective of your own thoughts instead of thinking from the perspective of the character.
Putting aside the numerical issues, just looking at the first chapter, it is still the same old fantasy routine. The aristocratic family is lawless in the local area and madly offends the protagonist, who also has a tough temper. Listen to me, except for bandits, no one recruits talents like this and invites family members to drink tea. These people have been rooted in the local area for hundreds or thousands of years, so they don't want to make a name for themselves anymore? The marriage through the maidservant is not a matter of cost. The maidservant was originally bought, so how can there be any loyalty? If the maidservant has evil intentions or is bribed, who will be responsible if something goes wrong? At least all branches are used, so that the children of the branch will marry for the benefit of the branch. As for resources, those are secondary. The most important thing is loyalty. Are you really not afraid that the contract will be too harsh and cause a backlash from the bride-to-be? Adding insult to injury when your family is in crisis, or selling information? Even if he can join with such harsh requirements, I suspect that this person is a young man who will do whatever it takes to gain profit and has no bottom line. Only in this way can there be underlying logic, instead of the old fantasy writing style that forcibly creates contradictions. A little personal opinion, please give me some advice.
What is the concept of fifty taels? Does the author know?
I wrote a chapter in a few months and read it without asking.
"Male Dressed in Female Body" is here to visit!
Fully support the masterpiece and make your "Sky Burial Knife" more and more exciting, big top!
@@ Zhao Chongchong Is his sister the heroine? , I think his sister could be the heroine, a child bride and childhood sweetheart.
The writing is quite good but there are too few chapters. It's boring to wait for the update early.
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Young man, you have the courage to write a biography. At present, the writing seems to be jerky, and the plot and setting are too old-fashioned.
Almost everyone I meet calls the protagonist Yasuko. Author, don't you think this title is a bit awkward? It's okay for men to call me this. In the book, the women who meet for the first time all call the protagonist this way. It feels like you are writing from the perspective of your own thoughts instead of thinking from the perspective of the character.
Putting aside the numerical issues, just looking at the first chapter, it is still the same old fantasy routine. The aristocratic family is lawless in the local area and madly offends the protagonist, who also has a tough temper. Listen to me, except for bandits, no one recruits talents like this and invites family members to drink tea. These people have been rooted in the local area for hundreds or thousands of years, so they don't want to make a name for themselves anymore? The marriage through the maidservant is not a matter of cost. The maidservant was originally bought, so how can there be any loyalty? If the maidservant has evil intentions or is bribed, who will be responsible if something goes wrong? At least all branches are used, so that the children of the branch will marry for the benefit of the branch. As for resources, those are secondary. The most important thing is loyalty. Are you really not afraid that the contract will be too harsh and cause a backlash from the bride-to-be? Adding insult to injury when your family is in crisis, or selling information? Even if he can join with such harsh requirements, I suspect that this person is a young man who will do whatever it takes to gain profit and has no bottom line. Only in this way can there be underlying logic, instead of the old fantasy writing style that forcibly creates contradictions. A little personal opinion, please give me some advice.
What is the concept of fifty taels? Does the author know?
I wrote a chapter in a few months and read it without asking.
"Male Dressed in Female Body" is here to visit!
Fully support the masterpiece and make your "Sky Burial Knife" more and more exciting, big top!
@@ Zhao Chongchong Is his sister the heroine? , I think his sister could be the heroine, a child bride and childhood sweetheart.
The writing is quite good but there are too few chapters. It's boring to wait for the update early.
Friends who love reading, come and chat [][]
Young man, you have the courage to write a biography. At present, the writing seems to be jerky, and the plot and setting are too old-fashioned.