Magnolia on the Branch

Don't know what you are writing? I barely read Chapter 40, but I gave up, it was not good. The writing style of the story is too general, and the characters are vague.

The male protagonist is the most disgusting, the big stallion

It's very interesting. The modern soul of the heroine is still there. She is not slavish, but optimistic and positive. She is very adaptable, neither slutty nor pretentious. She has a very special time-travel character. Living is the most important thing. This is the truth. There are not many unrealistic romances and domineering presidents in the book.

It's hard to evaluate whether it's good or not. There are a lot of strange plots, but it's not too cliché. I feel like it would be great if someone appreciates this movie and can make it into a film. But like Zhen Huan's Legend, the premise is that if you meet a very good screenwriter and director, you can make drastic changes to the original work.

This chapter is to make up for last month's missed draft, and there are two chapters left this afternoon.

The heroine is very stupid. Those women can think of inappropriate things but she thinks it's nothing. She is just a soft-looking 🐶 who was beaten and killed. The male protagonist is indeed from ancient times. Let's sleep together. What stories do the heroine and the male protagonist have to tell?

I accidentally clicked "It looks good", can I change it? It really doesn't work, there is no normal character.

The plot becomes more and more outrageous as it goes on, with all kinds of class confusion, and in the end, it ends hastily, no. There is no ending, it just ends. Inexplicable

After reading it, I thought that even if the male protagonist had many concubines in front of him, he would give the female protagonist a unique love and identity in the end. I didn't expect haha... The introduction said that the female protagonist would run away, and I thought the male protagonist would chase his wife in the crematorium. But the result is that the female protagonist keeps compromising and compromising until the end of the book... And then it's gone.

It's too shameful to imitate other people's writing about time travel and become someone else's concubine. That's probably what the writer is doing. Indiscriminate choice of topics and indiscriminate views.