The Eldest Sister Is as Pale as a Chrysanthemum, and When I Was Reborn, I Went Crazy

Writing is not easy to give an average. The subject matter is good, but many storylines have mismatched prefaces and idioms, and idioms are used indiscriminately. For example, in the Poetry Competition at the Flower Banquet in the Palace, the author's mysterious operation is such that the heroine disguises herself with a white jade mask and changes into white clothes to write poems. Wu Yuanyuan is standing next to her. At one moment, she recognizes that the heroine is composing the poem, and at other times, she mutters to herself, thinking that the heroine left without knowing anything. Concubine Zhang pointed out in public that the heroine was the poet and directly rewarded her with items. But others acted like they didn't know who she was. The same goes for leaving the palace. The rewards from the palace were given to the beggars and old people under the imperial wall. Ah~ this... This~ I don't know how much I thought I was sorry for abandoning the imperial concubine's reward, and how to properly attract the imperial concubine's hatred? There is also a heroine giving golden beans to the maid, what does it mean to laugh without any hesitation! There are many places where idioms are abused and the plot is confusing, so I won't go into them one by one.

Su Yulin is so annoying. It would be better to finish class early.

Uh, what does this say? How come the same mother has become a concubine again? I have made many typos and I don't even know who said this sentence or who said that sentence. What are we looking at?

I don't know what to write. The preface does not match the postscript. No logic

It's written in a mess, with few paragraphs and I can't even connect it. Wrong names back and forth You can just upload whatever you want. Why are you uploading it? The important thing is to participate?