Seeking the Dao on the Immortal Path

Can I still write? After just a few hundred episodes, you have been working so hard. Are you a bit ungrateful?

In the Demon Sect where Yuanying is in charge, the elders must be at least golden elixirs. As a result, a handyman in the alchemy room on the fourth level of Qi training is known as the Demon Sect elder. The first-level monster is the size of a Tibetan mastiff, equivalent to a Qi-training monk. The second-level monster is equivalent to a foundation. A second-level severely injured fire sparrow stands on the shoulder of the protagonist. The second-level monster is at least the size of four eagles, because the foundation can start to eat people directly. , It's not hunting, it's eating. The size of the transformation also needs to be explained. This is small. The protagonist is in the middle stage of foundation building. He hunts the late third-level monster with another fellow in the middle stage of foundation building. The reason is that the monster does not know spells or spells. It's more dangerous. If you can block it with spells, it will be fine. If you don't know spells, it will crush your head like a flying sword. I can't even imagine how powerful it is in pure physical training. In the end, you were killed by the thunder method and talismans you used during the Qi training period. No. The golden elixir method can break through the defense of the golden elixir physical training. It is useless to stand still and a hundred thunder talismans are used. After practicing the golden elixir without practicing magic, the innate body is still strong enough to be a monster, almost Yuanying. With this buff stacked up, it is really unreasonable to not be killed.

The writing is inconsistent, the logic is confusing, the plot is rigid and rigid, the characters are cliche and boring, and the fighting scenes are formulaic and unchangeable.

One step at a time, there are plans and bricks. This novel is equivalent to playing with bricks, brick by brick. The author's thinking is too rigid and lifeless. There are formulas for one trick and one trick. If you use formulas to write, can you write a good work? Author, you go to the factory to work. This job is particularly suitable for you. Boom, one finished product, boom another finished product.

The longer and verbose the article, the more stinky it becomes.

I just watched more than 300 episodes, and I posted two episodes a day. Are you kidding me?

Fool, my four spiritual roots are still at the peak of Yuanying. There are many other people who have transformed into gods.

What kind of magic circle master? If a disciple sets up a magic circle, he can trap a magician to death.

After learning acrobatics, he is indeed a talented writer.

That's ridiculous. You don't put your energy into cultivation. You just make some messy stuff and the main character is there.