Zhao Suhun traveled through the late Northern Song Dynasty, and Song Qinzong Zhao Huan asked to become his disciple. Starting from preventing the humiliation of Jingkang, he created the most powerful Song Dynasty.
The Jin soldiers went south and Bianjing city was destroyed? It doesn't exist. The teacher has no foresight and has already seen through Jin Bing's trick!
You asked me to cede territory and seek peace, pay money and silver, and silk and satin, and yet I still want to call you uncle? Bah! If you want to fight, fight. I have a teacher, so I'm not afraid!
Little Xixia dares to act like a monster. Watch the teacher push you to the ground and rub you with one hand!
Dali surrendered and asked for peace? The teacher said, let Duan bear the blame!
Wanyan Zongwang: Zhao Su is so wise and so close to a demon, so terrifying!
Li Qianshun: As long as Zhao Su is here, I will never get ahead in Xixia!
Duan Heyu: Master Zhao, please accept me as your disciple!
Suddenly I realized that I haven't rated the book yet, so I'll write a long review.
The early stage is quite exciting. To be honest, I think the most interesting background periods for historical writing are the Three Kingdoms, the Two Song Dynasties and the early Ming Dynasty. First, there are many capable people, and second, in a time of changing circumstances, the ability to change the past historical regrets is the highlight of this type of writing.
Although the ending is quite abrupt, I actually had a premonition a few days before the deadline for commenting. This article is not considered a eunuch, but the chapter that ends in an outline can still be said to be unfinished.
In 7mao, I have read several historical novels that have the potential to become gods at the beginning, but as I continue to write, I can't control them and end up unfinished.
In the end, the reason is quite simple to be honest. Time travel stories from the perspective of God's prophet are the most difficult to control the scaling of the plot, causing the plot to collapse and lose its excitement.
To put it bluntly, the plot is set too fast, too fast, and becomes invincible too early. Without the tension of the plot, naturally the plot can only rush all the way, and then no one will watch it if it is not interesting, and in the end it cannot be written.
It is true that no one reads online articles for the purpose of learning and gaining knowledge, they all come for the pleasure, as long as the writing is enjoyable. However, historical articles are different from fantasy articles and urban articles. A major background of historical articles is based on reality, so the most important one of them is the development of wretchedness, from weak to strong.
If the author is still planning to write a historical article, as an old bookworm who has read all the 7 cats historical areas, I would like to make a few suggestions. One is to lengthen the timeline and slow down the main plot. The other is to increase the number of farming and development scenes to prevent the protagonist from being too invincible. The third is to arrange a reasonable, appropriate and powerful opponent. After all, the people who can leave a name in history are not as simple as we think. The ancients were just limited by their vision, not stupid.
It didn't take long to write.
There is no system, no long-winded nonsense, it is not a nonsense article to popularize history, and it does not have incorrect views. I give it a good review.
Suddenly I realized that I haven't rated the book yet, so I'll write a long review. The early stage is quite exciting. To be honest, I think the most interesting background periods for historical writing are the Three Kingdoms, the Two Song Dynasties and the early Ming Dynasty. First, there are many capable people, and second, in a time of changing circumstances, the ability to change the past historical regrets is the highlight of this type of writing. Although the ending is quite abrupt, I actually had a premonition a few days before the deadline for commenting. This article is not considered a eunuch, but the chapter that ends in an outline can still be said to be unfinished. In 7mao, I have read several historical novels that have the potential to become gods at the beginning, but as I continue to write, I can't control them and end up unfinished. In the end, the reason is quite simple to be honest. Time travel stories from the perspective of God's prophet are the most difficult to control the scaling of the plot, causing the plot to collapse and lose its excitement. To put it bluntly, the plot is set too fast, too fast, and becomes invincible too early. Without the tension of the plot, naturally the plot can only rush all the way, and then no one will watch it if it is not interesting, and in the end it cannot be written. It is true that no one reads online articles for the purpose of learning and gaining knowledge, they all come for the pleasure, as long as the writing is enjoyable. However, historical articles are different from fantasy articles and urban articles. A major background of historical articles is based on reality, so the most important one of them is the development of wretchedness, from weak to strong. If the author is still planning to write a historical article, as an old bookworm who has read all the 7 cats historical areas, I would like to make a few suggestions. One is to lengthen the timeline and slow down the main plot. The other is to increase the number of farming and development scenes to prevent the protagonist from being too invincible. The third is to arrange a reasonable, appropriate and powerful opponent. After all, the people who can leave a name in history are not as simple as we think. The ancients were just limited by their vision, not stupid.
It didn't take long to write.
There is no system, no long-winded nonsense, it is not a nonsense article to popularize history, and it does not have incorrect views. I give it a good review.