In the Apocalypse, the Mother Is Not a Holy Mother, and She Is Busy Hoarding Goods and Raising Babies in Space.

Most of the authors of these apocalyptic novels are underage. Lack of common sense in life, confused logical thinking, blind writing, and random writing.

I've finished watching it, and it's a good watch. The plot is quite good, apocalyptic + space + beast control, the theme is novel, and the idea is good. But! ! ! However, I won't mention the typos. The author is so forgetful. As he writes, he forgets what he wrote before! Children forget to write down, teammates forget to write down, and other data will not be mentioned! The ending is also very abrupt. It feels like I didn't want to write it anymore and ended it in a hurry.

Babies! I have opened a new book! Space guide to the end of the world: I am hoarding hundreds of millions of supplies to support the army king!

Babies! I have opened a new book! Space guide to the end of the world: I am hoarding hundreds of millions of supplies to support the army king!

Babies! I have opened a new book! Space guide to the end of the world: I am hoarding hundreds of millions of supplies to support the army king!

The author's writing style needs to be improved. There are many mistakes and omissions in the novel. I am tired of reading it.

There are some problems with the writing, redundancy, grammar, typos, and some minor logical inconsistencies, but ignoring these is still a good subject matter. The well-behaved child and the strong and calm mother, the mutual support between the two women, continue to watch!

After reading half of it, I gave up on the article. The subject matter is good, so I have been asking to read it, but the author's literary skills are too poor, the description is dry and unvivid, and there are a lot of grammatical errors and typos in the sentences. It can be used as material for elementary school students to correct bad sentences.

Is this the end of the world or a picnic?

Everything else is fine, except that the three characters "Lin Anran" appear too much. They appear once in every three sentences. During peak periods, they appear in every sentence. It's really annoying to watch.