Stop Chasing the Goddess, the Ugly Duckling Is My Bai Yueguang

Overall it's pretty good, the plot doesn't drag on, it's fun to tear up enemies after rebirth, and the career line is pretty good too. But there are too few plots for the female protagonist, so the changes can't be made at once. Teacher, this line is not too much, just a little greasy. Then I thought I would write more about my family, stories about my stepmother and younger sister. All in all, it's okay, but if each line could be written in detail, it would be a very good novel.

As the author said, the ending is a bit hasty.

It was well written before I don't understand why, instead of writing about the heroine once in eight out of ten chapters, I write about a female teacher who either wears black stockings or bare-legged short skirts for ten chapters in a row. I don't understand what it means. In his previous life, the male protagonist refused to let his father find a partner, and ran away from home in a noisy manner. However, he was extremely filial to his female partner. In this life, he went to a restaurant to buy groceries for the female protagonist every day. It was only when he ran out of money that he remembered to care about this father who asked for money and sold yogurt. I wrote endlessly about the little fat guy on the street, and the heroine didn't appear once in ten chapters. I don't know what the theme of this book is.

If you don't look for a female protagonist when you go to college, you can't understand the author's brain circuit.

It's okay, but the ending is a bit rushed

So does the author still plan to write it?

The writing style is relaxed and humorous, restoring high school campus life, and the plot is also very coherent.