Ziyin Immortal Clan

What are you writing about? Is the early stage of assistantship over? Have you exhausted your talent? ! Ha ha ha ha

This is not a cut in half, this is a beheading. It was finished just after I started writing.

The plot is compact and the plot is vivid, a rare good book

I haven't finished the first chapter yet, but I feel a little uncomfortable when I see the body of Xuanyin, so I'm going to read everyone's opinions first. I'm already a little discouraged. I'm most afraid that the protagonist is a scumbag, a stupid pig, a holy father, who keeps a harem, has secrets and is careless, and is both pretentious and arrogant. I dare to say that it is better than a mortal's cultivation of immortality, but not as good as one percent of the immortal space.

It's not bad, please keep updating. The writing is really good. It has a storyline and you can also have ideas in your mind. It's not easy to write a book, especially a long one. Don't you want it to have a beginning and an end? I think you don't want it to be unfinished. Is there something that has delayed you? I hope you remember it soon. There are still people who want to read it.

Novels about mortals cultivating immortals, overall it's pretty good. It's the type I like. In the cruel world of immortal cultivation, a small foundation-building family unites to resist foreign enemies. Intrigues and deceptions, exciting fights

The chapters are logical and organized, three points better than a mortal's biography of cultivating immortals.