"You're almost dead and you're still thinking about her?!"
"Look at me, can I die?!"
"You have been chasing her for twenty years, but I have also liked you for twenty years!"
"You said it, you said it in the next life!"
"If you dare to let me down in the next life, your legs will be discounted!"
…
Li Qingchen was reborn.
I remembered that before I died in my previous life, I had been chasing the school beauty for twenty years and ignored me.
Only the little girl who had been his "buddy" for twenty years cut off her long hair and stayed with him until the end.
Li Qingchen made a promise with her for the next life.
And when time turns back.
He opened his eyes again and returned to his high school days.
Li Qingchen hugged the woman and kissed her directly.
"Little sister, I will come to find you in the next life!"
The plot is okay at the beginning, but it obviously drags on later on.
What I wrote in the front is okay, but what I wrote in the back is just to fool people. If you don't want to write it, you don't have to write it. There is no need to come out and fool people.
The plot of this book progressed too fast at the beginning. Near the end, I basically stopped writing about the female protagonist and mainly focused on the business of the male protagonist. Generally speaking, it was okay, but you can't read it with your brain, otherwise you will really be pissed off.
It feels like it's a bit unfinished in the back.
After reading so many books for so many years, this one is really a big one.
I originally thought the story was pretty good, but after reading dozens of chapters I realized there were some minor issues with the logic and plot. In the end, the outline was sent directly in the middle? ? ? [Angel] I'm drunk. Now that I've written it, can't I calm down and write it well?
Just watch the high school period, there's a bunch of stuff behind it
The first part is okay, but the second part is just ridiculous and the plot is contradictory. The second part is just as bad as if it was written by someone else. I don't know why the score is so high.
It looked fine at first, but will it be written by someone else in the future? It's just a piece of cake, you can't see it at all, how come it has such a high rating?
The opening is pretty good, the more I look at it, the more ridiculous it gets!
It's not good at all. There are a lot of typos. The plot in the later stages is terrible. I can't understand it at all. The finale ends with a scrawled marriage. What kind of crap is this? I suggest you delete the middle and later stages and use them as short stories to read about high school graduation, then you can quit the book.
The plot is okay at the beginning, but it obviously drags on later on.
What I wrote in the front is okay, but what I wrote in the back is just to fool people. If you don't want to write it, you don't have to write it. There is no need to come out and fool people.
The plot of this book progressed too fast at the beginning. Near the end, I basically stopped writing about the female protagonist and mainly focused on the business of the male protagonist. Generally speaking, it was okay, but you can't read it with your brain, otherwise you will really be pissed off.
It feels like it's a bit unfinished in the back.
After reading so many books for so many years, this one is really a big one. I originally thought the story was pretty good, but after reading dozens of chapters I realized there were some minor issues with the logic and plot. In the end, the outline was sent directly in the middle? ? ? [Angel] I'm drunk. Now that I've written it, can't I calm down and write it well?
Just watch the high school period, there's a bunch of stuff behind it
The first part is okay, but the second part is just ridiculous and the plot is contradictory. The second part is just as bad as if it was written by someone else. I don't know why the score is so high.
It looked fine at first, but will it be written by someone else in the future? It's just a piece of cake, you can't see it at all, how come it has such a high rating?
The opening is pretty good, the more I look at it, the more ridiculous it gets!
It's not good at all. There are a lot of typos. The plot in the later stages is terrible. I can't understand it at all. The finale ends with a scrawled marriage. What kind of crap is this? I suggest you delete the middle and later stages and use them as short stories to read about high school graduation, then you can quit the book.