Betrayed by My Best Friend, I Revealed My Secret Identity and Took on Everyone

The plot was okay, the ending was a bit rushed, but overall it was a good read. There are a lot of typos in the middle, which affects reading a bit.

There are too many typos, the plot is okay, and the ending is a bit rushed. Everything else is good

It's okay, the writing needs to be improved

Who is Mu Hewan!? Isn't the heroine's name Wen Lu or Wen Lu? What a mess!

In the first two chapters, the heroine also said that the matter of rebirth would be kept secret for the time being, and she would inform the hero later. As a result, I wanted to write about the male protagonist knowing about his rebirth after two chapters. Very contradictory.

The author did not graduate from elementary school? She couldn't tell him apart! Every time a man talks he uses "she" and a woman talks "he"! Then I thought I read too quickly and mistakenly thought it was the other person talking. I read it again and confirmed that it was not me who read it wrong, but the author who did not distinguish between him and her! Fucked to death!

There are so many typos that I can't read it at all.

In fact, I quite like similar novels. Unfortunately, I felt a little anxious while reading this one. The plot was a bit jumpy and didn't connect well. As mentioned earlier, the Wen family's grandfather, who was reluctant to raise her, planned to take over the company's revitalization and asked Butler Sun to implement the will, and then nothing happened. . . After a long time, it was suddenly said that Brother Wen had taken over, which was inexplicable. And there is also the matter of the male protagonist suddenly leaving the female protagonist, deleting WeChat, saying goodbye without saying goodbye, without even the most basic communication, and then reconciled inexplicably? I can't understand how the heroine can forgive someone who leaves you so easily? Just like playing house, one of the two is not firm in his position, and the other is dumbfounded. How can he be worthy of so many vests? Later, it was said that the male protagonist's biological father had to go to treatment immediately if he was in trouble. The two of them agreed to separate and then inexplicably went to deal with matters in the heroine's hometown first, and finally planned to go to the male protagonist's biological father. There are also various fragments of the author's frustration. The heroine told Lu Yao a long time ago that she was the ghost hand, and later said that she could not take her with her for fear that she would discover the identity of the ghost hand. . . There are also things like the heroine's original soul's salvation, etc. It feels like there are many holes that have not been filled in. I was confused when I saw it.

Can. Perfect result. Lovers get married eventually

It looks good, but there are a lot of typos at the end. Let's just say that the metaphysics seems to have not been written yet? Is it over?