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It's a bit lame, but still pretty exciting.
A small boat sails into the sea. Raging waves, urgent return to Hong Kong Island.
Don't be too anxious when writing. A proper plot can whet the appetite of readers. Someone who earns commissions from code words has been talking for ten years... Twenty years... Thirty years... How much content can be inserted in between? In the end, I didn't even get enough 500 chapters! Personally, I feel that between 600 and 900 chapters is the golden range for a good work. Continuation is naturally a solution, but there are actually many sequels in various works that have no effect, especially those where the protagonist has been changed. Of course, if you just started writing a book, your foundation is still very good, so keep working hard.
I think it's very good, with unique features and flaws, but at least it's a little better than those that can't be watched at the beginning. I watched the ending right from the beginning and didn't stop for several days. I didn't have time to catch up on the other novels I had read before! I gave it 10 votes, which is the most refreshing vote ever. Anyway, I just like the plot and perspective. If the writing is more detailed and there are not so many mistakes, it will be more perfect!
My name is Yu Xin. I was picked up by my master on a rainy day.
Xinyoumengying Lingyiyunjian Yi Piaofenglan Nian Youxinghan Siyi Yuelan Love in the ocean Eyes full of clouds and mist Yan Zuifenglian Shadow shakes by the waterside Sound moves Linchuan Fragrant mist Dreaming about Taoyuan Intoxicated by Xiquan Soul lingers on the willow bank Spiritual dance on the lotus bank Waves of thoughts Nian Rongshuanghan Siyang Xueyan Love Hua Yan Eyes fixed on leaves Yan Qingzhuxuan Shadow leaning on the plum railing Sound around the chrysanthemum altar fragrant orchid field heartfelt drawings Dream poems The soul depends on the strings Letter from the spirit Keep your mind in writing Nian Cun Mo Yuan Thoughts on the Picture Scroll Love and Poetry Garden Eyes in Ci Garden Yanliu Futan Yingcun Wenyuan Shengliu Art Garden Xiangliu Art Garden Heart trip to Bichuan Dreaming in the green mountains The soul steps on Cangshan Ling Yue Peak Yidengyunzhan Want to Chuangxiaguan Thinking over the mist Love goes through the woods Looking at the cliff Yan Tiao Gu Yuan Yingkanjianwan Sound spreads over the mountains Fragrant mountains Xinchi Grassland Dreaming about the wilderness Soul goes to the sandy plain Ling went to Zeyuan Going to Numahara Want to go to Dianyuan Thinking of going to the wilderness Love goes to wild wilderness Looking into the desert Yan went to Kawahara Filming in Lingyuan Go to Tahara Fragrance to Yuanyuan Heart flying in the sky Mengxiang Yuhuan Soul Wandering Star Han Lingpiao Yinhan Want to cross the river and Han Thinking about Yue Xiaohan Siling Hehan Love wears Xinghan Eyes cloudy Yan Lingxiaohan Yingdu Xinghan Sheng Linghehan Heart by the moon Lingyi Fengchuan Yi Piao Yun Dian Nianyou by the sea Si Yixia Bay Love Lin Yuan Eyes of Fantasy Star Pool Yanzui Yutan Yingshaofengtan Sound moves the fog pool Xiangning Snow Lake Dream lingering pool Intoxicated by Flower Pond Soul in Star River Lingwuyue Bay Feeling in the wind and mountains Nianrong Xuedian Thoughts on Yuchuan Love cloud pool Eye Ningwu Bay Yan Qingfengtan Shadow leaning on the stars Sound around the top of the rain Fragrant Snow River Heart in the Moon Lake mengluofengwan Soul Yiyun Dian Lingji Xingchuan Intent on Yuluan Nian Cun Snow Lake Si Zhu Fengwan Stay in the clouds Eyes on the Star Pool Yanliu Wuchuan yingcunyuwan Leave a Reply Cancel reply Xiangliu Snow Bay Heart travels to the Moon River Dreaming in the Cloud Pool Soul steps on rain bay Lingyue Fengtan Aiming to reach the top of the stars Want to cross the snow river Siyue Wuwan Love across the cloud pool Looking at the top of the rain Yan Tiaofengchuan Yingkan Xingwan Sound of Snow Pond Fragrance floating on the top of the clouds Xin Chi Yue Bay Dreaming about Fengtan Soul goes to Yuchuan Lingfu Xingwan Intending to go to Snow Lake Want to go to the top of the clouds Thinking about going to Fengchuan Falling in love with Xingtan Eyes on the Rain Bay Yan goes to the top of the snow Shadow crossing Yunchuan Shenglingyuetan Heart by the stars Lingyi Yuchuan Feeling at the top of the snow Nianyoufengwan Siyiyuntan Love Wukawa Eyes of the Moon Bay Yan Zui Fengtan Shadow shakes the snow peak Sound moves the cloud bay Xiang Ning Yutan Dreaming about Xingchuan Intoxicated by the wind Soul in the Moon Lake Lingwu Snow Bay Yiyang Xingchuan Nianrongfengtan Thoughts on the top of the moon Qingmiyuwan Eyes Ning Yuntan Yan Qing Xuechuan Shadow leaning on the top of the wind Sound around the star bay Fragrant Yuchuan Heart in love with cloud pool Dream falling on top of snow Soul Yiyue Bay Lingji Fengtan Intent on the top of the star Nian Cun
Alas, I don't have much writing skills and I don't know how to write a plot that's a bit confusing. The old-fashioned protagonist is still a virgin. If you don't know how to write, just write a cool story. When you recruit a younger brother and a beautiful woman, you can arrange a few more twists and turns and then push it all the way. This is the brainless idea of Xiaobai's novel. After all, you just read it to kill time and you won't notice. It's so boring. I watched the score come in at 9 o'clock and I was disappointed. I don't understand how this score was calculated to be a bit high. Also, author, you are actually not suitable for writing novels. There is no need to watch others scolding you. Just do what you are good at. If you really like writing novels, then let's practice more before publishing.
It's rare to read this book to the end, I feel it's quite good.
The new book [I Have an Immortal-Slaying Sword] is on the shelves. New and old book friends are welcome to take a look. I hope you will support me a lot. Thank you!
The little characters are all well created, with flesh and blood and thousands of faces. There are not too many intellectual loopholes, the pace is bright and not watery, and most of the foreshadowings are responded to. There are a lot of typos