Build a Haunted House and My Employees Are All Weird

The plot is very good, full of ups and downs, not mediocre. It is the best article I have read in recent times. Seven Cats also gave me a big surprise. I read the whole article carefully. However, the writing style is as good as that of ordinary college students as mentioned in the comment area. It is not beautiful and does not describe the protagonist and supporting characters very well. There is no sense of substitution. I don't mind the writing style. I personally endured the writing and read it for the plot. There are many twists and turns in the later stage. It is recommended that if you can't stand it in the early stage, you can directly read the later stage.

Gaga Gaga is beautiful, Super Invincible is beautiful, the author's logic is very good, but I can't get around it, but I can understand it all at once later on, it's so cool! It's also a bit scary. I recommend everyone to watch it. I won't spoil it for the family.

This looks so much like a horror house, bro

It's gripping, I want to read it in one sitting. Collected

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Getting better, good writing, humorous

I think it's better not to have a male protagonist in this kind of novel, and just write a little ambiguity from time to time. Writing a male protagonist lowers the quality of the entire book. To be honest, I wanted to give up the book when I saw that the female protagonist's haunted house was not unique. Generally, the female protagonist has an aura. Are you telling me that a man who pops up halfway also has a haunted house? He also took the initiative to ask the heroine if she also has a haunted house. I really need to change this. If the heroine's haunted house is a big halo, it feels very low-quality if it is given to others. The content is well written. The biggest problem is that I hope this kind of weird novel does not have a male protagonist.

Your writing style is really average. The subject matter is also quite good. If you write it well, it should be of a thrilling type and very attractive. Unfortunately, your writing style is really average. It is very simple and simple, and there is no idea of ​​​​bringing people into it. The heroine herself has done nothing. The people and things around her seem to be a magnet, and they have a magnetic force coming towards the heroine. Moreover, the heroine's golden finger is very open, but it's a pity that you described her as a bit dull and stupid. She has a golden finger but doesn't know how to make the most of it.

The material selection of this book is very novel. It is cut into a small world in the form of a haunted house and there are many reversals in it. The plot is full of ups and downs. The only shortcoming of this book may be that there are several scenes where the heroine is a bit stupid for an hour. Apart from this small shortcoming, I feel that this book is really good. I have read many types of books and this book can probably be ranked third!

Wait until it gets fatter and then read it again, and then give it a five-star review. (ฅ••ฅ)