Love: Counterattack with Fat Girls

Hey, there's no one there, so I'll be the second one.

The plot is okay, but the details are unfocused and too messy. In fact, you don't need to write about starting a business to make money. You just need to highlight a few things. For example, when the male protagonist encounters a certain dilemma and the female protagonist helps solve it, there is no need to write about other characters. You only need to describe the role of a certain character at a certain point. Otherwise, the novel will look like an anxious writing here and there. After all, the plot only serves to highlight the emotions of the male and female protagonists. The more detailed the plot is, the less resonant the novel will be. After all, this is not a book focused on entrepreneurship.