Shock! I'm in a Survival Game, Driving Wuling Hongguang to Chase the Boss

Written by AI, it's really embarrassing

After listening to it, the subject matter is okay, but there are too many adjectives to describe it, which makes it uncomfortable to listen to. , So elegant and light, the ending ended in a whoosh, a bit inexplicable

The following comments are personal opinions. If you think what I said is wrong, then I am wrong. I have a strong desire to survive and I also like emotional plots. However, in the early stage, the heroine clearly did not believe anyone. From the time she was little in Japan, everyone believed it. Then, brother, I can understand. That sister has only traded a few times... And has no life-long friendship. Suddenly a girl appears. Sister, then the heroine is obviously the kind that no one would believe, but she suddenly believes in the hero. I feel like something is wrong. The above point is that if the majority of netizens think it is wrong, ignore me. If you say I am wrong, then I must be wrong. The early stage is very good. I haven't watched it since I finished here in Japan. I can't comment on the subsequent plot at will. Come on, the author.

The first 100 chapters are good to read, but the following chapters are a lot watery! Ordinary

Good-looking and good-looking. It just feels like the ending is a bit rushed

Today we are going to take a look at this preserved egg with red pepper. I am not telling you what else you can do besides writing. You are so good at writing that I don't know how many people have been stunned. Your writing is so good, you know? You have written New Horizon, you know? So keep a low profile for me in the future.

Zundu is super good-looking. I was first attracted by the author's title and cover. I have to say that the cover is really attractive, because after all, the title is the end of the world, but the cover is similar to the cover of a romance novel. It is very novel, and the title is even more novel. It is Wuling Hongguang! Then comes the plot. I think this plot is very logical. From entering the game to progressing and finally revealing the truth, every step is very orderly and can be said to be very logical. Overall, the article is not chaotic at all. The plot in the middle is also very exciting. The fighting scenes written by the author and the plot of the heroine entering the punishment dungeon are really real and well written. I really feel like I am immersed in the scene. There is also the description of the scenery. The author's writing style is super good. I have read many apocalyptic articles, but I think there are only a few authors with good writing skills, because after all, it is a plot of fighting and killing, but the author is like a breath of fresh air. The description of the scenery is really good, as if I really saw it. It is very beautiful. I feel that this essay can get full marks in high school. Then there is the creation of the characters. Although the description of the male protagonist is biased towards appearance, I have to say that the description is very good. I feel that the author has a good writing style for describing beautiful things, which can be used as material. Every character in it is vivid and almost perfectly described. Finally, it's my own feelings. I just think this story is particularly beautiful. There are many reasons, such as the interaction between the male and female protagonists (although the male protagonist does not appear very frequently, but almost every time he appears, he is full of sweetness), and some of the copy scenes written by the author seem to be right in front of me. But what I have to mention is that I seem to know the endings of Shu Fei, Bai Feichen, and Zhang Simeng. It would be great if there were more stories about them in the extra chapter. I really want to see it, but what attracts me the most is the author's writing style! ! ! ! ! ! ! It's really well written. I'll definitely be hooked after reading the first chapter. I really love this article written by the author. I feel like I'm being healed.

However, however, there are too many words in this article.

The plot is super good, but the writing style needs to be improved. I look forward to the author writing a high-scoring work with a score of 9.5 Or above soon!

Chapter 129 tied. The writing is okay and the plot is average. It's well written in road survival articles, but it's not so conspicuous in the category of post-apocalyptic survival games. Some places are a bit like the one next door. The early stocking up is a fun story, and the dungeons are short and simple. Chapters 71 to 87 of the Dead Rising dungeon are the best parts of this book in my opinion. Some of the later dungeons in Sakura Country were deliberately designed to highlight patriotic sentiments, and the heroines were inconsistently designed (the author explained it here, but I still think so). Strong women make stronger men, and the mythical male protagonist seems to be omnipotent. The emotional line is also a bit inconsistent, not sweet but a bit embarrassing.