Apocalypse: My System Is a Little Weird

The beginning part was good, but the later part fell apart! They have all turned to cultivating immortals and researching technology to defeat immortals?

I have always written like this when writing about ordinary people and cultivating immortals. Later, I also inserted the title of God and Measuring Tribulation into the writing. It was written in a nondescript manner.

The front is pretty good, but the back is off.

As I continued writing, I began to write in the direction of cultivating immortality. After reading the early part, it became difficult to continue reading. The life span is often tens of thousands. If you have such longevity, why bother? You can live to the modern age! First of all, the first point is that whether there is a protagonist or not, the First Emperor can dominate the world. It can be said that there are more protagonists than one, and it doesn't matter if there are fewer. It is better to write Gao Wu in an alternate history! Secondly, gaining lifespan is too easy. It was a bit broken from the beginning. You already have so much lifespan, why bother bothering with it? Even weeding and weeding can increase your lifespan. What's the point of being a killing god? Throughout the ages, fighting and fighting, isn't it just for immortality? Your life span is tens of thousands of years, which makes people feel that it is meaningless!

I don't know since when, I can't understand the titles of each chapter... I have a bit of trouble reading the content.

Halfway through, the story of the confrontation becomes boring.

If you don't understand history, don't write about it.

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