I Use My Sharingan to Become a God in the Wasteland

The plot is exciting, good-looking, and good.

Many chapters feel like they are just raising the number of words, and some plots are completely unnecessary. In order to sell bricks and rocks and take pictures, does this thing require so many people to die? It requires so many chapters to cobble together. It's as simple as just finding a photo studio to take pictures. It's like a high-tech thing. The ending is too sloppy. Even the photo studio could write many chapters. The ending is done in one chapter. Most of the women in it are dead and only one is left. You're a little confused. , And the Feng Shui Master is superfluous, and Country Garden has nothing to do with the main plot. The writing is too long. Many parts of the plot are cumbersome and not compact enough. Master Jiu died too easily, and it was gone in one go. The chapters that should be rich are passed in one go, and there are so many chapters that shouldn't be written. It's helpless.

Very good, the only one who has listened to all of it in the past year.